All Comments on 'My Wife's Cousin Ch. 01'

i liked the easy way you got this story going and started slowly developing the characters while the action moved too. you have a nice way of telling the tale.

Nicely done. Good lead in and left us hanging for the next!

...U used the phrase, "...like a pro...". Who really knows WHAT a professional prostitute WOULD DO? Maybe she likes her chosen profession? Maybe she's got the rent to pay(duh). Maybe she's a nympho. Maybe she prefers blow-jobs to straight fucks. Maybe she's a dyke? Who knows but I do know 1 thing, if you've got any kind of class at all, YOU WON'T ASK HER!

Otherwise, fine writing.