All Comments on 'Storm Riders'

Told with a twinkle in the eye, masterfully executed and very entertaining.

Good luck in the contest!

Good one, I love that undertone of smartass! You still write a hot one Tx.

Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

An good read with fine writing. Good luck in the contest.

enjoyed reading it...

Awesome plot! Great storyline, good job. I was held in suspense as new info was revealed. I was a little let down with stage settings, and logistics. "We cuddled in bed, ... then we fucked hard right there in the kitchen floor..." I never would have guessed fairies, elves, ect would enter this story. I was looking for more witches... "and then they vanished..." Good twist! I also like how their cum caused his 'sex organs' (cock and tongue) to swell. Thats awesome! Good luck

nice plot

It would be great to hear more about them! A tall tale well spun...like your writing!

Did you originally write this story for a Halloween contest?

I was expecting the three witches from Macbeth, but your concept was better. Certainly more erotic.

Fanciful, but highly erotic. Well written, as usual. Keep those stories cumming