All Comments on 'Family Planning'

I'm so hot after reading this story!! I could feel myself inside all the action,you made me cum so hard !!!!

I hope you will continue and let us know what happens to Emily KATIE in NEW JERSEY

I enjoyed this version of your story way more than "Career Girl" and would love to read a sequel where she is her stepfather's mistress and babymaker, maybe for the stepbrother to!

at least 3 of my favourite fetishes, and several that I'll from this day forward consider extremely arousing. If that wasn't enough, the came packaged in a good, cohesive story -a bit unrealistic but so enjoyable. If you can, please write ,ore stories with this. I mean, non-consenting impregnation of a woman strapped down my a doctor pumping her full semen. Oh my~

As another commenter said, your writing drew me into Emily's role. What a great combination of fetishes.

Amazing story, had me cumming in minutes, well written and extremely sexy, please do more like this. (tied down with doctor impregnating them against thier will)!

quite arousing! quite!1

the stepdad should have made his donation in person

agree with previous comment!!! me like the being tied down and impregnated against their will

very good!

1 of my favs.

Emily needs to get revenge on her mother. Maybe in your next story, she runs away with her step dad and his son and they leave that selfish bitch behind!

I agree with all the others, Emily needs revenge. For example, she runs away one day and calls the police, and they arrest her mother and stepdad, but instead of helping her, they continue to impregnate her against her will.

Revenge is needed.

Theres something called abortions.

Wow, this story has struck some cords. I am happy with the this story because it has a strong family that gets what it needs. This story also made me very aroused and that means I am just about to burst. Nice mixed up fantasy breeding.

I enjoyed the story, don't get me wrong. But couldn't she just go get a lawyer and sue for rape? Not only that, she could very well go to an abortion clinic.

I totaling agree with the previous post. She needs to go see a lawyer about what to her at the doctor's office. Bring all of them down. I doubt she was the first female this happened to. Next she should get rid of the baby inside of her.

what a total fucked story and I hope it was a story not real life

Gave you a 5 for a great orgasm(s)

It's a story in the non-consent category you fucking tards, wtf did you think was gonna happen?? Don't like non-consent or rape then stay out of that category. Don't slam the author about rape when clearly the whole category is about that... smh

its a non consent sexual fantasy, get over yourselves.

Love to see that it is Emilys stepbrother Sean who's baby she will begin carrying on her belly for the next nine months and DNA testing proves this after the baby is born I would then love to see the stepfather bed Emily on a regular basis and turn Emily into an obedient and submissive baby making machine

Emily's step brother Sean should bed Emily every night. He should make her hi girlfrieng and pump his seed deep into her womb during her pregnancy and when Emily gives birth to the baby Emily as Sean's girlfriend should allow him to impregnate her again

This story made me so hot I actually had an orgasm over it I wish I was Emily and made to take the seed of Sean only I would then loved to be taken home and forced to become Sean's mistressd

Would love to have Sean's seed pumped into me the same way Emily experienced it. Only I would have been all too happy to be forced to become

me his mistress and obediently submit to his sexual wishes and desires for me

Love to become Sean's mistress and get fucked by him every day love to get flooded with his sperm and carry his babies in my belly127B

Years ago my stepfather blackmailed.me and l was forced to become the sex toy of my 18 yo stepbrother. I was a 30 yo woman and l eventually became pregnant with my 18 yo stepbrothers child After l gave birth to.the child l had to raise the child on my own

I hope it is SEAN'S sperm that impregnates Emily and begins to grow in Emily's belly

I hope the baby growing in Emily's belly turns out to be Sean's. If it is I hope Sean makes Emily his mistress and Emily surrenders to his wishes

Emily should become Sean's mistress. I would like Sean to mould a beautiful and proud Emily into a sweet and submissive baby maker

It feels like this was written by someone with very little knowledge about how reproduction works. The chance that the sperm would still be viable and that she would be ovulating at that exact time is rather low. But other than that I really liked it.

So fucking hot. I don't really care who is the father as there will be plenty of opportunities in the future.