Now that's the right way to escape a shrew wife! You sir have a seriously warped mind, I like that!
Ummm what a present! Imagine the possibilities....men dolls for women whose husbands ignore them....princess dolls, knight dolls....surfer boy dolls....the list could go on and on....I loved it! I'm a sucker for a happy ending!
This was a scary story, but erotic.
A very entertaining work. The only thing that detracted from it was your consistent misuse of "it's." I loved the last line, with the sparks and the wintry sky
Loved the story TE999. The segmentation was nice and just as I like it. Nice and tight!
Always a delight to read your stories, Tom. Wish I could write something this effective!
Love your twisted mind! Awesome! :)
I was hoping, when the main character saw his love in his wife's face, that somehow the spirit would take over and help the wife to become more of what he needed. Just call me a (horny) romantic.
xo from a friend who has decided her hit and miss readings should be anon this year.
That was an amazing story, one that really lived up to the 'erotic horror' title. One of the better short stories I've read. Great job! Hope to read more like this.
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