by Krazy35
pretty good story but the end blew it. didnt seem that kind of submission. that one sentence about renting her out ruined the whole tone of the story.
Overall, this is a pleasant little story. But that bit at the end about renting Fawn out was unnecessary, and far beyond simple retribution. IMHO.
-- KK in Texas
to rape sombody any excuse is a good excuse.
Wasn't big on the renting her out, overall story was luke warm at best.