All Comments on 'He Does As She Threatens'

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KoreavetKoreavetover 15 years ago
O.K. until...

Renting her out? Really.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
um rent her out

pretty good story but the end blew it. didnt seem that kind of submission. that one sentence about renting her out ruined the whole tone of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Mostly good.

Overall, this is a pleasant little story. But that bit at the end about renting Fawn out was unnecessary, and far beyond simple retribution. IMHO.

-- KK in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I guess that if you are an asshole who want's

to rape sombody any excuse is a good excuse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not to bad until you let your friends use her.

That lost you some.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lukewam

Wasn't big on the renting her out, overall story was luke warm at best.

baileytommybaileytommyabout 5 years ago
Sister's

It's a disgusting story

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