All Comments on 'A Gift of Love'

Your short story deserves my short reply..."Terrible."

~ Imp (Alessia Brio)

I like it, the way fate and spirits collide is well written. An interesting idea and I love what you did with it.

Well, it's a little "eau de rose" but I enjoyed it. The person who commented terrible must be another competitor (or maybe French, when that would mean fantastic!)

Good luck. R

VERY well written. Enjoyed it greatly (even if it was hetero :) )

I loved it! I really liked the promise of a fresh start for Billy, although perhaps I would've liked to have heard more :)

Well, it was certainly a different story than the typical hearts and flowers, which is why I enjoyed reading it.

Very creatively different.

Good luck in the contest.

I really enjoyed this story because it was so sweet and romantic.

Would've liked just a bit more, but short is good too. I love these kinds of stories. Good luck in the contest.

I think he meant to say Terrific instead of Terrible as I gave you a '5' and a vote of 100 and the one that spelled Terrific wrong did to I am sure. Loved the short story and the feeling that came along with it.! Valentines was always my special Holiday - but now even I don't have anyone to share it with.! Thank you.

Very sweet and romantic. Thank you.

OK Lynn start writing the next chapter.

DG

An enjoyable read. Thank you.

This was a really sweet story. I am a sucker for happy endings anyhow. This one hasn't ended yet but, when it does, it will be a happy one.

Very captivating story I hope it continues because it was way too short. :)

Tears<BR>

Tight throat<BR>

Blurry vision<BR>

Forty years wasted with the wrong person<P>

Tears<BR>

Tight throat<BR>

Blurry vision<BR>

Admiration/envy for/of those who found the right person<BR>

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Thank you for writing this. Valentines has no meaning for me, your message does, but grief is not always about the dead.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

anticipating the continued story, Lynn. :)

That's all, just really sweet.

Good job as always Lynn.

Very moving and flawlessly executed. Good luck in the contest.

This sweet story puts a different turn of ROMANCE and eternity onto the basic idea of Valentine's Day. My Mom still communes with my Dad, who "died" in 1990, and I with my wife, who ceased living in 2000. The permanence of loving souls is well depicted here. Thank you!

So poignant! So apropos!

Very well written and enjoyable to read. Thank you for this gift to others who have lost someone close and recovered.

though there may be great distances involved. TK U MLJ LV NV

What a sweet story this was, and I have to admit, it brought tears to my eyes. It's too bad that Literotica only allows five starts, because this one is worthy of so many more.

MP

Sweet!

5 stars - To me 'soul-mate' relationships are continuous through out millennia. Our human bodies rely on energy to survive. You cannot destroy energy - only alter it. So I think that this energy continues to flow through my ancestors and every once in a long while we are joined with our soul-mates and live together through another lifetime. This continues forever.

frirst time reader of your stories kinda of eeerie but nice 5

Very sweet. Hopeful.