by urbanslut
problems. What a fucking absurd story, hindu & muslim should NOT have included.
Keep going. More of the same. Your command of the language makes reading a pleasure.
Nice stuff author. Good writing and I hope we will get to read more of it.
My anonymous in India friends - its fantasy. Lets not bring real life issues to the table. Your reaction is evidence in her success in targeting the central taboo of Indian society. How many times have Indian women been told "anybody but a Muslim", eh? And spare the abuses guys, Indian men have a terrible rep, lets not add to it :)
Please write a second part for When It Rains, It Pours
Hi, My name is Archana Sharma and being a brahmin I was so turned on by reading this story.. pls post more
though the script is good and exciting, but the author shows his bad taste by abusing religions, sex is universal, its no different to a hindu muslim or a christian, author should understand that, and he should know there will be people who have real life experience vice-versa... again sex is human do not bring religion in to this coz it sounds soooooooooo stupid..
I am a young 23 year old keralite brahmin conservative girl.. my unlce resides in dubai.. he has a son.. completely spoiled with smoking, drinking, partying, non veg food, girls, gambling, etc etc.. Me being a super ethical and moral girl, my uncle thought i could help in making my cousin bro better person.. he invited me to dubai.. i went there.. he told me about the situation and wanted to spend some time with cousin bro and try and bring him on right track.. late in the evening, he came drunk in the house.. i tried and talk with him about leaving these habits.. he told me, he would leave everything if I try his kind of life for a week with him.. he wanted me to spend a week with him in a nearby guest house and if after living with him for a week, by following his kind of life, if i still ask him to quit all those bad habits, he will actually quit.. i accepted the challenge as i thought it would be easy for me to say NO to his life after a week.. although i will have to sacrifice myself for a week.. we went there.. day 1. non veg, day 2. drinking and smoking day 3. wearing revealing dresses and swim with him day 4, watching adult movies, day 5. gambling, strip poker and sex, day 6. he asks me what is my answer to his kind of life... i go nude in the kitchen, cut a piece of chicken and pour wine in a glass and serve him.. i say, good bye to my old life.. i love this new life... please make a story from this...
I urge you to delete this story. Especially in a perios when the relations between Hindus and Muslims have been strained in parts of India such as Muzaffarnagar, such stories add fuel to fire.
I urge you to delete this story with immediate effect, latest within 14 days from the date of this comment, failing which I will be more to take recourse to further action.
Sincerely
mmmmm..I loved the story, more so because of interracial element in it. Yes, Muslim cocks are circumcised and this factors, I assume, results in longer staying power. These cocks are a huge attraction for most women, who love to give a blowjob (which woman does not?)
Arti
Don't know why some readers are pissed off. This is a fantasy site after all. Racist angle was hot for many of the readers.
Phenomenal story! Very well written! Most of us readers are broad minded enough to go beyond religious constraints. Beautiful creative mind!
A thoroughly satisfying story. Mukta manages to remain a complete lady thru out, which added so much to my enjoyment.
I just put my finger's in my parents after reading this story, I'm leaking out of my panties... "It's really is pouring"
Every bit as hot as expected ;)
Awesome piece! Do re-visit and write a sequel.
this story somewhere else and have been trying to find it again.... and here it is.
Nice to see a Hindu woman expressing her deep desire for us muslim men when this is seen as taboo and forbidden. Your story would help connect many liberal hindu women like you who want this forbidden fun. Keep writing ;)
Always a feast to readers on stories of such delicate n fragile illegitimate relationships. A dream cum true for a brahmin woman to experience the taste of a m***** d***... Loved the story.
Mohini
Too much raw sex can be boring! The Hindu Muslim angle was in bad taste, Could have been avoided
I just touched my dick after reading the story and it ejaculated immediatly
All Hindu wives should try sex with circumcised Muslim men. It will give them more satisfaction. Hindu husbands should encourage and help their Hindu wives fuck Muslim lunds. This will keep them more satisfied. Hindu ladies should get interred by Muslims to produce stronger children: This will improve Hindu race also.
There needs to be a sequel where these two visit Mukta at her home and demand why she did not come back for more.
It can start like this:
I just finished my bath , and stepped out when I heard the bell. Not caring to dress up , I threw over a bathrobe , tied it neatly and went to the door. I got a shock , mixed with fear and excitement as I saw two familiar faces standing outside.
My thoughts that this was a dream was shattered as I heard Mansoor say " Hello Mukta Madam , did you miss us?"
I stepped back in shock which only gave them space to walk in. I was still as they closed the door nd looked back at me.
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