All Comments on 'When It Rains, It Pours'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
You slut you are creating....

problems. What a fucking absurd story, hindu & muslim should NOT have included.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great writing!

Keep going. More of the same. Your command of the language makes reading a pleasure.

angel228angel228almost 15 years ago
Loved it!!

Good story. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
fuck muslim bitches l

write about hindu males fucking muslim bitches.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Racist

You spoiled the story with Racist attitude.

salman78salman78almost 15 years ago
loved it

every line of this story. well written.

thanks

cannabisindicacannabisindicaalmost 15 years ago
Nice!

Nice stuff author. Good writing and I hope we will get to read more of it.

My anonymous in India friends - its fantasy. Lets not bring real life issues to the table. Your reaction is evidence in her success in targeting the central taboo of Indian society. How many times have Indian women been told "anybody but a Muslim", eh? And spare the abuses guys, Indian men have a terrible rep, lets not add to it :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Please write a second part for When It Rains, It Pours

Please write a second part for When It Rains, It Pours

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very erotic

Hi, My name is Archana Sharma and being a brahmin I was so turned on by reading this story.. pls post more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Bad Taste...

though the script is good and exciting, but the author shows his bad taste by abusing religions, sex is universal, its no different to a hindu muslim or a christian, author should understand that, and he should know there will be people who have real life experience vice-versa... again sex is human do not bring religion in to this coz it sounds soooooooooo stupid..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I want you to write a story for me

I am a young 23 year old keralite brahmin conservative girl.. my unlce resides in dubai.. he has a son.. completely spoiled with smoking, drinking, partying, non veg food, girls, gambling, etc etc.. Me being a super ethical and moral girl, my uncle thought i could help in making my cousin bro better person.. he invited me to dubai.. i went there.. he told me about the situation and wanted to spend some time with cousin bro and try and bring him on right track.. late in the evening, he came drunk in the house.. i tried and talk with him about leaving these habits.. he told me, he would leave everything if I try his kind of life for a week with him.. he wanted me to spend a week with him in a nearby guest house and if after living with him for a week, by following his kind of life, if i still ask him to quit all those bad habits, he will actually quit.. i accepted the challenge as i thought it would be easy for me to say NO to his life after a week.. although i will have to sacrifice myself for a week.. we went there.. day 1. non veg, day 2. drinking and smoking day 3. wearing revealing dresses and swim with him day 4, watching adult movies, day 5. gambling, strip poker and sex, day 6. he asks me what is my answer to his kind of life... i go nude in the kitchen, cut a piece of chicken and pour wine in a glass and serve him.. i say, good bye to my old life.. i love this new life... please make a story from this...

hisexcellencyhisexcellencyover 10 years ago
DELETE This

I urge you to delete this story. Especially in a perios when the relations between Hindus and Muslims have been strained in parts of India such as Muzaffarnagar, such stories add fuel to fire.

I urge you to delete this story with immediate effect, latest within 14 days from the date of this comment, failing which I will be more to take recourse to further action.

Sincerely

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
When It Rains, It Pours

damn hot fucking keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

it is really pouring

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting erotica

mmmmm..I loved the story, more so because of interracial element in it. Yes, Muslim cocks are circumcised and this factors, I assume, results in longer staying power. These cocks are a huge attraction for most women, who love to give a blowjob (which woman does not?)

Arti

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Write more such stories

Don't know why some readers are pissed off. This is a fantasy site after all. Racist angle was hot for many of the readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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HunkydrewHunkydrewover 9 years ago
Great story!

Phenomenal story! Very well written! Most of us readers are broad minded enough to go beyond religious constraints. Beautiful creative mind!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
MOST ENJOYABLE

A thoroughly satisfying story. Mukta manages to remain a complete lady thru out, which added so much to my enjoyment.

jamesn100jamesn100about 7 years ago

loved the story, young-old, rich-poor, hindu-muslim ... fantastic

Anisaha5Anisaha5over 6 years ago
Super Sexy

I just put my finger's in my parents after reading this story, I'm leaking out of my panties... "It's really is pouring"

longknob14longknob14about 6 years ago
As hot as expected

Every bit as hot as expected ;)

Awesome piece! Do re-visit and write a sequel.

NexttimeroundNexttimeroundover 4 years ago
I've seen

this story somewhere else and have been trying to find it again.... and here it is.

asifaslamkhan09asifaslamkhan09over 4 years ago
Voicing forbidden pleasures

Nice to see a Hindu woman expressing her deep desire for us muslim men when this is seen as taboo and forbidden. Your story would help connect many liberal hindu women like you who want this forbidden fun. Keep writing ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Irresistible relationship

Always a feast to readers on stories of such delicate n fragile illegitimate relationships. A dream cum true for a brahmin woman to experience the taste of a m***** d***... Loved the story.

Mohini

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Too much raw sex can be boring! The Hindu Muslim angle was in bad taste, Could have been avoided

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I just touched my dick after reading the story and it ejaculated immediatly

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

All Hindu wives should try sex with circumcised Muslim men. It will give them more satisfaction. Hindu husbands should encourage and help their Hindu wives fuck Muslim lunds. This will keep them more satisfied. Hindu ladies should get interred by Muslims to produce stronger children: This will improve Hindu race also.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

There needs to be a sequel where these two visit Mukta at her home and demand why she did not come back for more.

It can start like this:

I just finished my bath , and stepped out when I heard the bell. Not caring to dress up , I threw over a bathrobe , tied it neatly and went to the door. I got a shock , mixed with fear and excitement as I saw two familiar faces standing outside.

My thoughts that this was a dream was shattered as I heard Mansoor say " Hello Mukta Madam , did you miss us?"

I stepped back in shock which only gave them space to walk in. I was still as they closed the door nd looked back at me.

......

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please continue

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