All Comments on 'Dee's First Porn Shoot'

Loved it - this is such an erotic tale, well written (and edited!) Bravo. Would love to read more!

What a load of crap. Not up to your usual standard.

Really boring

I always enjoy a believable erotic story, and it's easier said than done.

Really loved it. Erotic and believable. Wish Dee would give us a sequel.

vitorio is a better editor on dee´s story than he is on his own

the verb to slide conjugates as slide, slid, slid

incorrect tense here

Great to have read your feedback to my earlier comments. Makes it easier for me to relate to you and your experiences. Glad you have so much fun!

Started kind of slow, but became very exciting.

It’s a decent and believable story. All stories have critics. It was an enjoyable read.