All Comments on 'Halo Ch. 05'

Hooray, what a perfect birthday present for me...another HOT chapter!!! I've been checking everyday for the next one and this surely was worth the wait!! It's about time those two got together. Please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter. I can hardly wait! Now, I'm going to go back and re-read this one. LOL

i just hope janey stays with ren this time.

Please let Janey stay with Ren this time. Or at least, if she has to leave him, it's only for a short while. Or even, she leaves Ren briefly to tell Adam the engagement is off. I just want those two to be happy already lol.

Finally a new great chapter with Janey and Ren.

Please make Adam go away from Janeys life forever soon and let Janey and Ren have a future together.

The chapters with them are great but the whole staying with Adam thing although she doesn't love him and often feels uncomfartable with him makes me sick.

Hope you will finish the series soon and move on to create a new great one.

I am so glad to see Ren and Janey finally reunite (physically and emotionally). I hope Janey stays with

Ren this time; hate to see him jerked around. Great Chapter!!

Janeys got herself into quite a mess! I just hope she figures out what she wants and sticks with it. Going back and forth between the two would be bad for everyone.

please don't let her break ren's heart again

So happy with this chapter...Janey belongs with Ren...she does love him as much as he loves her...I really do like Adam but he doesn't have the same chemistry as Ren and sometimes Janey is very uncomfortable with her relationship with him. I just hope that he doesn't use his power as a policeman to hurt Ren again. Thank you for the update, looking forward to more.

This was the best chapter of the "Halo" series thus far. It was great reading it. Your writing is so detailed. I love the fact that no birth control was used. Which could be a great factor in reuniting Janie and Ren. She could finally get rid of Adam. Can't wait to see what you have planned.

janeys a cheating whore

Wonder who the father will be next time ...oh yeah ...she wont know !