All Comments on 'Hopeless Situation Ch. 04'

pleasures he esposes for his female relatives

Please! Don't read stories like this when you are not into it. Your comments are annoying and utterly useless. You don't seem to grasp the difference between fantasy and reality. Get a life!!

this is a difficult story to like because of the subject but I appreciate the quality of writing and the imagination. I wonder how it will end.

Enjoy sick things, this is not normal or healthy.

two anonymhaters on one chapter, you must feel so privileged :) I certainly hope you don't worry about them. Reading on.

This chapter was supremely erotic, and my favourite of the series. The feelings and descriptions were very physically evocative. I love how he calls her baby all the time, but you just need to fix the punctuation a bit: ie: commas are needed in front of baby where it doesn't start the sentence and after. If you are able to, this category is very worthy of exploring more (perhaps something more traditionally nonconsentual, and not necessarily Master/Slave).