All Comments on 'Camping Trip'

A terrific read, thank you!

I really enjoyed reading this story, it is great. Please continue with it. What happens when they get home?

Great story. I hope you do a sequel. You have a wonderful talent. Thank you for sharing it with us.

At last an imaginitive story well written. Congratulations.

What a great story! Well written, with a good sense of sensuality in the descriptions! Truly a pleasure to read, please keep up the great work!

@ Phaetonlive,

It doesn't surprise me at all that Literotica screwed something up, but whatever the difference is, i still thought the version i read now is wonderful; a perfect hybrid of erotic and emotion.

Sorry your text got a bit messed up but that story was still great. Hope we get to see more from you and thanks very much for your 2nd hot story.

Just one of several silly mistakes.<BR><BR>PROOF-READ if you want to continue to improve your writing skills...which are pretty good already.

Another excellent submission. Please keep writing these hot stories. I appreciate the effort. Thank you.

I think the only way to describe this story is an "Intense sexual drama." Good job, please keep them coming.

I wish the story would have carried on with their love affair and lives. How they coped with the tension of being mother and son while also being in love and having sex as lovers. Would she quit acting like his mother and more like his wife, equal as his life mate and partner? Does her son feel even closer to her now that he has enjoyed her passion and her body,having shared one of life's most powerful emotion together? ...............That's the life I would love to read about, the everyday life and love that they share, becoming one soul together, taking whatever life hands them, and building their love stronger...Thanks..........Rich

Good attention to detail of his arousal and the fucking. Of course, stories about a son fucking his mother are always the most fun to read, but your story was particularly good. Keep writing stories like this and we will keep reading them and enjoying them.

I agree with some of the others in saying it would be fun to watch them fuck once they're back home.

at last. a passionate mom son story were written. thank u and bless u. there r nothing like mom son incest. keep writing on mom son.

totally loved it, write more,

great i had to jack off before finnishing the story

Wish she was my mom, I jerked off and cum hard thinking I was unloading my cum in her hot cunt

This is a very wonderful story, I enjoyed it very much. I wish you would write a second chapter to it. Please do so soon.

one of the best stories i have ever read. very hot. i cummed twice while reading it. keep up the good work.

This story was damn good!!!!! Thank you for a love story with real sex.

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a great love story. I hope you will continue it. Please write another chapter to this story soon.

fantasic ! thanks

A tender love story that blends passion and compassion, love and lust in a convincing account of two human beings encountering the fullness of each other beyond the societal roles we are all forced to play.

Young Richie is deeply attracted to his own mother's cunt. No surprise there, it's normal with healthy young guys, who are wild to shove their big stiff prick up their own birth canal---their own mother's twat. (The gifted author of this excellent story is still in his 30s; maybe he shares that urge?) Lucky for Rich, his sexy mother is just as wild as he is for her boy to introduce his fat young dick up her mommy-cunt. This is happening MUCH more often than tight-assed people care to know. Liberated sexually savvy mothers are realizing that their boy's got something jumping around in his pants that can do them a world of good. Momma, how'd you like to get power-fucked two or three times a day by a boy you love to bits? Mothers love their darling son, love his marvelously stiff prick, and love his hot young balls that never quit. Motherfuckers and their son-fucked moms don't blab about it, they just keep on joyfully DOING IT! You probably know a few yourself.

That was a great story that was only spoilt by the spelling mistakes...clean those up and you're on your way to being a great author.

Great...but...you need to find yourself a proofreader to help catch spelling and grammar mistakes that spellcheckers just can't handle. Once you do that I am sure you will find yourself in the running for a place on the classics list.

The right length, build up and details. Definitely needs to have a chapter 2 and so on..

Just jacked off thinking of it but the thought still lingers.

Good job.

A story about love and fulfillment between mother and son . Please write a second chapter with mother and son in a continuing loving relationship .

write more please

one of the best in this category

better...keep going

I read this so, so long ago sometime in 2011-12 I think. My god, has is really been that long? And I had almost forgotten this story. And then Literotica's random story spinner threw this up and it took me back. What a wonderful story.

The fun I would have. My mom has always had a good body. Her tits are perfect and I would love to feel them as I fucked her neatly trimmed hairy pussy. Being confined to such a small area, I'm sure I'd just stay inside of her until I was hard enough to start fucking her again.

Brilliant story, pretty much perfectly written, erotic as hell (for those who find such stories erotic).

Couldn't find 'any' grammar or spelling mistakes to distract me from my enjoyment of the story.

'LEGEND!!'

Five Stars!

I liked the other story better. This one was slightly less belivable to me

Its an ok story, read it twice to figure it out. good read thanks

No idea what story the others read, but this one is beautiful! Ten stars ********** here because I couldn't put ten up above!

Sadly it appears that some are emotionally incapable of accepting this story for what it was. Their loss.

Extraordinarily erotic and sensual. One of the very best.

Well written. I don't know what story some of the commentators read, but it wasn't this one. It started well, and ended well. Nothing extra is needed, grammar and editing were good. I'd ignoring the negatives. You and I will always have them. Keep writing.

XYZ

I have read both of your stories now and found them to be very engaging, well written and extremely enjoyable. I like your writing style and look forward to more from you. Thank you.

Five Star all the way!

damn you left us hanging