by Sean Renaud
Good idea and a bit different but I for one would have liked it to be longer. Please follow-up!
I liked it, but there's no good explanation why she couldn't return home. What was controlling her? Why didn't she know about it? She seemed to know of other cases where someone had been in a similar predicament.
I knew I should have stopped reading when you described insects with dog dicks...but I didn't and so now I can never get those 5 mins of my life back. I award you no points and may God have mercy on your soul.