It's an interesting world you've created here and definitely erotic but you might want to go over and proofread it. The spell checker won't distinguish differences such as their and there or buy and by for instance. Also editorial notes are not something you want in a published version, that's something you keep separate or in an appendix.
However, this one doesn't sound worth the effort!
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