All Comments on 'I Knew Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Romance?

You call this romance

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OK, so you knew

It's only half a chapter of the story. You should have continued to the rescue and whatever before posting - and where does the final sentence come from?

KittyKat147KittyKat147over 14 years ago
I think this could be good

I think once the next chapter comes out it'll be good!! Keep going.

lonie69lonie69over 14 years agoAuthor
hi all

i know some of you aren't happy with it, but if you wait for the next chapter you'll see that it is romance, i plan on taking this out to a few chapters and i have already submitted the 2nd one. i'm only new so any helpful tips would be great

Zodia195Zodia195over 14 years ago
Good Potential

I've read a few 'singer falls for regular gal' storylines before so we'll see how this one turns out. Good potential here. Uh, where is Melborne? It's in Australia right? I hope Cal gets his dues. I never like guys like that.

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