by lonie69
It's only half a chapter of the story. You should have continued to the rescue and whatever before posting - and where does the final sentence come from?
I think once the next chapter comes out it'll be good!! Keep going.
i know some of you aren't happy with it, but if you wait for the next chapter you'll see that it is romance, i plan on taking this out to a few chapters and i have already submitted the 2nd one. i'm only new so any helpful tips would be great
I've read a few 'singer falls for regular gal' storylines before so we'll see how this one turns out. Good potential here. Uh, where is Melborne? It's in Australia right? I hope Cal gets his dues. I never like guys like that.