All Comments on 'A Matter of Color'

by Slirpuff

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why not divorce the BBC whore?

After all she is still your wife and there are legal complications involved in that. Such as filing federal tax returns, if she files first and claims your exemption, you lose it. She can file for credit based on you and your job. There is a ton of things she can do to make you life at least unpleasant. Get the divorce and get on with work. I guess you are just stringing the black girl on as a type of reverse revenge by lying to her, get a life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Revenge should go further

Well written and believable! However, Rick is not the only one that should suffer. Di should be strung up upside down and acid poured in her pussy! That would deter other white women from black men!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What was the point?

What was the plot? What was the problem and what was the solution? This was a rambling, plotless mess. You had no end goal and it showed. It seemed to be some sort of racial mumbo-jumbo. It is one of "you're" worst stories. Wait! Did I just use the word "you're" incorrectly? Have you ever even written that word? Then there is "The companies going to" is so wrong it hurts. It is a contraction... company is, or "company's going to". Your editor is a saint for even trying!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wished

You would have finished pandoras box and skiped this one, story turned me off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story

Short and to the point...all of your points! Well done. And contrary to others opinion I found your plot simple consistant and easy to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Crap story

and the author still can't master the incredible complexities of "your" vs "you're" -- I mean, it IS rocket science and all that, right? And his editor is of no assistance.<p>Keep cranking out the sub-par writing, and I'll keep bringing it to yore attention. I mean, you're attention. Your attention. Damn, that's harder than it look's! I mean, looks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good story

well written and the fact that his friends actually felt bad that they didn't tell him about his wife cheating on him. Only problem is blackmail..why didn't she tell her husband? and if it was blackmail, why the long kiss at the end? As for the tools who believe in "pouring acid" down a womans pussy for cheating, WTF is wrong with you? Seriously, use your fucking head! Adultery does not equate disfigured or maiming. That shit is seriously fucked up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
There was no Blackmail.

There was no reluctance on the black cumsluts part. The story was good. And a great relief to read about a writer who has the balls to write a story like this about what really goes through a black cumsluts brain. And what happens when a Blackman see's a white woman. They could be short, fat, ugly, pretty it doesn't matter. They just want to get their own back. That is the ONLY reason blackmen fuck white , normally married, women. Trouble is there are sick white husbands and boyfriends that sit by at watch this happening. That is so fucked up! Black men do it just to spite the white man. Well done slirpuff. Good story keep them coming. and ignore twats that moan about your writing, they don't have the guts to write any type of story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You sleep with dogs

You wake up with fleas. "They say men think with their dick...black men do it eighty percent AT LEAST." And that's the environment you intentionally put your wife in? Could you be any stupider? Why didn't you just have the wife hang out in a whore house; or a crack house? And then be suprised cause she's a whore or junkie? Your main character may be PC, but he's still STUPID! Ever notice how most PC whites live in the lily white suburbs or gated communities or belong to country clubs. THEY TALK A GOOD GAME. Your main character is just stupid.

Risq_001Risq_001over 14 years ago
You know Slirpuff..................

<p>While I normally like your stuff, this has to be the <b>single <i>offensive</i></b> thing you've ever written, bar none</p>

<p>Yes I'm black, and I have to say you crammed as many stereotypes as you could into this story didn't you?</p>

<p>On average men (white <b><i>and</i></b> black) who have freakishly large penis are less than something like 2-5%. So in your story you have a room full of the exceptions? Men who would make a horse blush? My god why didn't I get a foot and a half dick? And I can't really say that I know of <i>anyone</i> personally who is black and who brags about nine inches of limp dick either. Or eight. Or Seven. Or six.</p>

<p>Except in stories here =(</p>

<p>Here every black male on the planet is carrying a twelve inched lethal weapon</p>

<p>The second is that black men think white women are the drug that they just can't get enough of.</p>

<p>That's like saying there aren't any black women that are either smart, intelligent, <i>or <b>attractive</b></i> enough to attract a black man or he is to shallow to appreciate it if she does.</p>

<p>What the crap!</p>

<p>I can't stand that misconception. Do some of those idiots understand that some women, White or Black, work differently. Some women, white and black, are different and pursue men differently? Race has nothing to do with it. That's like saying all White GI's can't wait to hit it with an oriental woman. Or given the chance white men will every time leave their wives and family for 10 minutes of a Oriental woman's time.</p>

<p>Funny I don't see that in the story, but during the Korean and Vietnam wars it was a pretty popular stereotype.</p>

<p>My god, I would have thought better of your by now. And I can't even pretend that it's just the way the character feels. I mean... my god this was bad.</p>

-Risq

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Good story

The plot was straight forward and without any twists. I should think that Keith should have felt awful about the whole business.. When will people learn that it is better to tell the truth right off the bat?

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There is no way that I can classify as reasonable his not wanting to finalize the divorce. I did find the reason for not delaying that the first commentator pointed out to be very interesting.. It suggests that some other stories might have a plot hole in them....

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
totally Racist story

what a fucking scumbag this author is

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 14 years ago
yet ANOTHER glorification of Stupid men

every story it is the same thing. The husband is wretchedly stupid and it is laughable.

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The Idiot husband after finding out how SOME black men think about married white woman takesd her to an all black party where she is the ONLY whiyte woman

and she gets drunk and felt up.

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and he says NOTHING? the sex was wild and hot and it is clear that she was turned on by the Black guys dancing with her and feeling her up....NOT her husband.

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Yet stupid never says anything about this the next morning?

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 14 years ago
Also: significance wife's blackmail scheme/lie

One other telling point: the wife's obvious lie and her claim of blackmail.

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Once the wife saw that Mr stupid her idiot husband was NOT going to say anything about how sexualky turned on she was the 1st night of the party... she realized that Mr stupid is such an idiot and moral wimp that she could Fuck that other guy-- the football player-- and Mr stupid would probaly never catch on.

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hence the obviously ridiculous and false tale about her being blackmailed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Misclassified!

Your story should not have been included under the "Loving Wives" genre. It should have been under the "Interracial Love" category.<p>

I suspect that, even though "color" was in the title, the purpose was to induce readers of LW stories to read this interracial mess.

lancewmlancewmover 14 years ago
What a rambling mess of stereotypes

It is hard to say how you could have done worse with this "story"!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Pretty bad.

OK, first, who cares what category it fits into? Second, it wasn't good, especially the ending. Sorry, I usually like your stories. - Ttom

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I sorry to correct you

the average white guy is bigger in size than the average black guy and it's statisticly proven. that just makes you somebody who looks to much porn. and there it's like in every sport, while white guys mostly still have a higher education so they can earn enough money by working they don't have to do it with there dick. and as it is a risky business anyway (aids, hepatitis....lost mind) only the black guys seem to see porn as an easy way out of money promblems which is not the case but they just figure it out a lot later. so this story is way below your standings, it's even bad in character developing cause there was none.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What's the point?

I won't attempt to contradict the other reviewers. Instead, I really want to know: what's the point of drawing out the divorce if a) she's paying for it and b) you've got a new girlfriend you obviously like who wants your sweet pahtootie free and clear? The ex-wife will get whatever the court gives her, regardless of how long you prolong the agony - for both of you. Besides, there is always a possibility you will draw some weak-kneed judge who will order YOU to pay those monumental attorneys' fees you racked up by drawing out this mess. MOVE ON!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sorry this isnt the other site you post in and it

does belong in IR not LW. I agree as one reveiwer wrote that the average size of black cocks is about the same as white cocks. In fact in swinging at clubs the largest cock of record was 15 inches and it was white and most women avoided it including his girlfriend. Assuming you use the standards you used in this story one must assume, with statistical evidence real, that sexually active black males with a variety of sexual partners have a higher incidence of HIV than average. Put another way she fucked a BBC fucker and odds are she and he are infected. Another statistically important fact most women who turn to BBC wind up on drugs and become whores. Not really an interesting step up. A lot of truth in the old saying once you go black you wont go back, in most cases most people want nothing to do with you after you take that step. So when you write this drivel please consider what you really are saying. Most states dont require both partners to sign the divorce documents, it can be done in court and if one of the parties doesnt show shame on him as it is granted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not Erotic

Generally I like your writing but this one was had to take. First I don't really care for Interracial Stories, but this one was hard to swallow at best. The characters were pretty unbelievable the ending didn't help. I sure you're next story will be much better. Thanks for sharing...

SleeplessinMD2SleeplessinMD2over 14 years ago
Mixed feelings on the Race Angle!

The positives of the story were the discussion of the racial perceptions and reality but the negatives were the age old cock size stereotype and unreasonable lust for white women. With a pro football career on the line why would Rick chase after one white wife when on the campus he has pussy readily available of all colors? Rick meets Diane at one party and then he goes out of his way to blackmail her? Ok, jocks are known to be stupid but why would he show up to a party where he would not be welcomed? Why reject the divorce if Jim is going to move on with his life? Jim dates a black girl for payback (since he did not notice her in his class before)? Diane is a skank. She does not care what STD she may bring to Jim [Rick's dick has probably been in every easy whore in the area]. Her so-called "blackmail" included clubbing and long deep goodbye kisses. Yeah - Right! Bottom Line: None of the people in this story are halfway likeable (would you invite any of the major characters to your home?) The race angle was crude and it did not add to the story (could have been big dick Italian men).

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
As always...

...good storytelling. Decent characters. I don't care much for the story content itself, but it was interesting to see you handle it. Worth a read.

FunseeeekrrFunseeeekrrover 14 years ago
Sleepless is letting his racism show by

hinting that all black men have std infections. Choose the right one and all you get is a really hot fucking with a larger than average cock. The wife in this story probably was torn between her husband not understanding and the orgasms that big black cock gave her.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
Jesus H christos funseekr....

...you attack one of the few readers that ISN'T spewing racist crap and then you spew it yourself with your delusions about black cock size.Will you morons do some fucking research,it's called google and and it's even free.I was going to say to slirp that at just under 7 inches he's just over the size of the average black dick which is JUST(3/8") over the size of the average white dick.Besides which,as funseekr should know if she's such an experienced swinger,length is a joke when you understand female anatomy and cervix placement,Girth is a different story,but I'm beginning to understand that no one on this site knows how to read a tape measure,nor separate fact from fiction.Slirp,when you give no thought to the development of one of the main characters the story bites.But still worth a look.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
Oh yeah....

...."USSA"-fuck you and you're heroes Beck and Limbaugh.You don't like it then give up your social security and medicaid you fascist hypocrite.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What is all the noise about?

This was a story about a husband that didn't want sloppy seconds or thirds or fourths from blackmen. Which makes this story so much better than all those cuckold wimp white boys stories that Funseeker reads. But as she is the blackcumslut queen she should know what she's talking about shouldn't she? Great story Slirpuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Average penis size...

SERIOUSLY. PLEASE SHOW ME WHERE IT IS PROVEN THAT THE AVERAGE WHITE GUY HAS A LARGER PENIS SIZE THAN THE AVERAGE BLACK GUY BECAUSE BLACK GUYS ARE LARGER, WITHOUT ENHANCEMENTS, THAN WHITE GUYS, ASIANS, AND EVERY OTHER RACE. I DONT KNOW WHY WHITE MEN THINKS THIS MAKES THEM INFERIOR BECAUSE IT DOESN'T. JUST AS IT IS STATISTICALLY PROVEN THAT WHITE MEN ACHIEVE HIGHER EDUCATION, BLACK MEN ON AVERAGE HAVE BIGGER DICKS. LET IT ALONE. IN EVERY RACE THERE ARE ANOMALIES; ONLY THE AVERAGE MATTERS.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I like your work but...

Too much racist for my taste.

And most of the black man are big because they´re bigger(taller) than white men.You don´t expect a six foot seven inches tall man with a five inches pecker, right?

zed0zed0over 14 years ago
Pretty Racist!

I mostly enjoyed the no wimp out kick the slut to the curb story line, and especially enjoyed his put down of Rick and his wife. However the blatant racism was a bit hard to take, and seriously detracted from the story, otherwise I would have given you a hundred.

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 14 years ago
Ditto on the racism

I've known many black men very well - friends, musicians, colleagues at work. Some of them had white girlfriends or spouses, but it wasn't as portrayed in so many of these stories - they were true to their women. Many of these stories seem to assume that any black man in the country will screw a white woman if she tells him that she wants it, which is completely inconsistent with all of the black men that I have known. I usually like SP's stories, but this one kind of turned me off.

kelly_kellykelly_kellyover 14 years ago
Honestly, I hated this story

for Racism. I'm strictly against racism. I've <b>non-white</b> friends and they are good people like us. I like your stories, but this was too bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I Spent Lots Of Time

With blacks at U.P.S. where I worked in a large midwestern city and they look at women differently and friendship ment nothing when it came to chasing pussy, espically a white friend. When you hang out with blacks you better watch your shit or someone will take it, espically if your white. When we finished our shift the married white guys mostly went home, the married black guys mostly went out chasing, exceptions on both sides but thats the way it is. Like someone wrote, when you lay with dogs you get flees.

curiscpcuriscpover 14 years ago
normally a big fan.. but..

I also found this posting a tad racist and to be candid, in addition it was not erotic. While there was sex it was certainly not as well crafted, exciting or arousing and previous posts.

Has the author started to pander to the hate crowd that trash anyone that dares present cheating wife, interracial or cuckold in an erotic light ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Funseeker

How do you choose the right one, happily married guy from your church? Bottom line, if you let him he will fuck you, married or not, religious or not, friends with your husband or not. When it comes to pussy it doesn't matter, thats the real deal, if thats racist, its also a fact.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
curiscp?

"I also found this posting a tad racist and to be candid, in addition it was not erotic. While there was sex it was certainly not as well crafted, exciting or arousing and previous posts. Has the author started to pander to the hate crowd that trash anyone that dares present cheating wife, interracial or cuckold in an erotic light?"

<p>This is your comment. Having skimmed through your stories I notice that you and your partner are swingers and that you fuck around and you let your partner cuckold you and make you into a wimp. So you are not going to like a story where someone actually stands up to a blackman for fucking his wife. Oh and trust me on this you WHITE readers and you Black writers of IR dogshit are the RACIST ones, Racist against WHITE Men AND WHITE Married Woman. This writer is NOT RACIST unlike many readers on this site who ahve something against WHITE people. Funseeker being ONE of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Slirpuff rocks

I'm giving this 100 to show my appreciation for this author, although this story would only have a 75.

Slirpuff you are one of the most improved writers on this site. Your grammar and POVs may still be a bone of contention but you try to use new plots in the LW section and I greatly appreciate that - you show plenty of skill and imagination.

The points made both in the story and in readers' comments about black men and white women can be seen as racist but frankly it happens too much for it to be a coincidence and that behavior itself could be seen as racist (i.e. a black man wanting a woman BECAUSE she is white). That doesn't give me the right to say that it's wrong and I'm not doing so. In case a few of you missed the point, the author showed his fairness (and NON-racism) when he showed the group of young blacks redeeming themselves and showing a conscience when they realised what they had allowed to happen - they eventually protected the white man and showed that they are only human after all - just like every other group, race or clan - every part of the community tends to look after their own kind, and it's not just blacks who do that.

Please keep on writing Slirpuff and I'll keep appreciating your stories - thank you for your efforts.

Norman D - the only reason I'm anonymous is because I am not a member of Lit. I see no point in 'joining' just to be a spectator.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hey funseeker how do you find the one right black

guy. Only way I can see is to fuck em all until the right one shows up. And what is this shit about her being torn between liking a BBC and her husband not understanding? Not understanding what? That she is an adulterer that fucks people without concern for her self, her husband, or her marriage, and places both of them at medical risk. Grow up little girl before you ruin yourself totally.

OldfaithfulOldfaithfulover 14 years ago
I have to agree

with other commentators that this is probably not one of your best stories, but your evolution as a writer has been so dramatic in such a short period of time that I am happy to give you five stars and a hundred percent. One thing I think doesn't make sense is the main character not granting his slut wife a divorce. As someone mentioned in a previous comment there are lot of legal and practical reasons why that is not the most intelligent decision. As for the PC anti-racist crowd, just ignore them. In my book a white married woman that fucks outside of her marriage, specially with a black man is not better than a street whore. Does that make me a racist? Probably, but not more than most black men that hate whites and see white women as a prey. Finally, please finish "Opening Pandora's Box"

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
My two cents

Wow, I personally like the cheating wives stories because they are an emotional rollercoaster. Add some racism and everyone starts spewing. But, IMO, the racism is in the lead character but not the story. Can’t an author write about a character suffering from racism and not himself be labeled a racist? Our character ,Jim is flawed, he bought into the myth that black men all had bigger dicks (hopefully not our author) and that all black men wanted white women. I am personally, very tired of the one dimensional black male characters here on literotica (evil men with big dicks). Likewise, I don’t like an author bringing a black protagonist and not have any racial tension, get real. At least in this story most of the black men are pretty decent, except for the one asshole, Rick. The racist comments our character makes at the beginning are not supported by the rest story. For that I fault the author, that was overdone. Other than that it was a good story.

ON PENIS SIZE AND RACE……

In Kim Cattrall’s - Sexual Intelligence(2005), she points out how men depicted in early Roman and Greek statues all had small penises and the folk lore of the time was that men with large penises were thought to be lazy, animalistic, and obsessed with sex. At that time in history this stereotype had nothing to do with race. So now, in America, when we are hanging a big dick on every black man we denigrate them, a practice made confusing because black male comedians themselves propagate the myth. It's a double edged sword. Think of the embarrassment of being a black man with a smaller than average dick. (Sorry Risq)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
weak and ignorant

you spent all your energy writing into a ridiculous, racist, myth just so that you could annoy your readers. Either grow-up and develop enough skills so that you don't have to fall back on such childish attempts... or stop posting. So many posters on this site make it so obvious that they are middle aged make loser with no sex life. All the women in their lives lose all self control and just MUST fuck a large dick... have you actually ever met any women like that? It is just so childish... and the posters have to make all the men small weak wimps who can't face up to a larger male... heck, haven't ANY of you actually learned how to fight? Haven't any of you ever seen a gun or bat? In real life, I have NEVER, NOT EVEN ONCE, seen a grown man back down from someone who fucks them over as much as you portray in these stories. What I really can't get, is why the hell are you not just extremely embarrassed to post this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why?

Compared with other stories from this author, this story seems stupid and pointless, with an even more stupid and pointless last half.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excuse Me

After the Tiger Woods train wreck ,than all of black america comming to his defense saying whats the big deal, we all do it, I think any charge of racism is bullshit. This is what happens, she would have been hit upon constantly and never ending, thats just the way it is.The one thing is after all this he would never date a black woman.

0649d0649dover 13 years ago
race may or may not be a problem; place's wealth definitely is

If you live in a nice middle-class neighbourhood and marry someone you trust (and also if she doesn't drink much or at all - chance of drinks being spiked), you won't have to worry so much.

Black men may prey on white women but it's only really worse in less affluent areas. They may also prey on black women dating white men, because they feel the black women should be dating them, but black women are stronger than white women, I think (saying from experience), and have grown up in a black man's world and want little to do with the losers amongst them. They just want a man who would do right by them. I don't think white men in general target any race; they just wanna screw anything in sight. Are they both bad? Just as much as each other (if wealth is the same).

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
Stupid story so I rated it 1*.

So many things about the story is stupid. I will point out two.

First, blacks and whites have close to the same average size penises. Some studies show blacks up to 1/2" longer and other studies so whites slightly larger.

Going strictly by the Kinsey data, which still remains one of the most exhaustive studies on penis size to date, the average white male has a penis measuring 6.2 inches long and 3.7 inches around, whereas the average black male has a penis 6.3 by 3.8 inches, for a difference of 0.1 inches--not what you'd call statistically significant. When it came to flaccid length, however, blacks fared a little better: 4.3 inches long, versus 4.0 inches for white males. So it may be, therefore, that while those of African heritage appear larger initially, under actual working conditions things tend to even out. You should consider this a tentative hypothesis rather than a scientific fact, as there were only 59 black respondents to the survey, versus 2,500 for whites."

Based on a number of other surveys (most notably Masters and Johnson), of thousands of men of many different races, white males actually have the largest penises. White males averaged an erect penis length of 6.4" while black males averaged 6.2". Hispanic men averaged 6.0" and finally east Asian men bring up the rear with 5.6".

Second, throwing the divorce papers in the trash doesn't prevent the divorce. When he didn't answer with the allowed 30 days, she got a default judgment awarding her the divorce, all the furniture and household goods, both cars, and $3,000 per month alimony.

It is a good thing he got a higher paying job, because the alimony is for life since, instead of getting married again, she and her lover just live together. Even so, since most of his wages go to pay the $3,000 per month alimony, he only has enough money to live in a room in a low rent neighborhood and drive some junker.

saratusaratuover 12 years ago

I'm not shure how feel about this type story. I'm not against two people loving each other no matter what race they are. But to project this thing of trying to bread out another race or saying that one or another race is taking anothers wife or girlfriend is rather acidic towards the relationship of that race doing the nasty to the other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Absolutely amazing!

After hundreds of comments to prove how little he knows, it turns out DWornock knows a whole bunch about penis size. Is anyone really surprised?

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Nice story Slirpuff, thanks for sharing it.

Yuri5Yuri5about 12 years ago
DWornock, mostly right...

except for at the end. But you were probably being sarcastic.

Yes, a default judgement is possible, but getting all the marital assets and lifetime alimony for such a short marriage is not likely; Florida does allow permanent alimony but it's still not fucking Massachussets.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Race

Let me proclaim this again.

I am not a racist. Black, white, red, yellow, catholic, jewish, baptist etc. etc. etc.

I HATE EVERYONE EQUALLY!!!

That being said, she was a cheating whore slut cunt wife who deserves being dumped by her honest hard working and going to night school husband. Fuck 'er

HA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
betrayal

rudely buggered cornhole, a meaty cock is smoked, betrayed!

FD45FD45almost 12 years ago
This is the second time I've read this story

And for reasons which should be readily apparent, the term 'Cold Day in Hell" always drifts through my mind both when I heard about final study session and Miss 'You ain't good enough for me!'

javonfontainejavonfontaineover 11 years ago
Please add more.

More detail if the wife is pregnant by Rick, as it appeared that she had morning sickness in one of the paragraphs.

I like stories better if it shows some semblance of retribution, cause, effect and redemption... and a little pain and suffering as well.

jiminabjiminabover 11 years ago
puff I liked this story. Thank you

To betrayedbylove. There are only 3 races on this earth. All the rest are religous off shoots or bigotry and hate. You seem to be there. Enjoy

cantbuymycantbuymyover 11 years ago
Just for info

I went to all black public schools and did lots of military time - communal showers and that crap about blacks having bigger dicks us just that - crap. Liked the story. The payback to bubba was great - lost his career over pussy. "I was raped" is like most girls being virgins until after about their third guy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Huh?

Ok story until the end. Why trash the divorce papers? I don't get it. Also, I'll never understand why characters keep falling into a bottle. Tie one on, then move on. Anything past that is simply self-destructive.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333about 11 years ago

An odd tale to say the least. Thanks for the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
bubba?

As if u werent racist enough u named him bubba. What a fucking asshole

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
BYE

bye slirpuff. 1*s

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
you really don't get it readers, do you?

He believed in her, she was true. He believed in his new found friends, he had their back and they had his. He was a fool over his beliefs. When neither was true, what then? It was predictable that the bad guy shagged her drunk and then blackmailed her, at first. After that she got comfortable cheating, as he planned. He believed she was weak. He believed she was in love. He believed he could damage both for his own ego. He was right. The story is about how to avoid the clever destroyer. Get your heads out of your arses or it may happen to you.

Thanks author. Sorry, shit happens.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Why do the writers who make Blacks the Sancho in their stories fixate on

The black aspect?. Don't they know enough black guys to know regular middle class blacks who don act like hood rats?. I do agree some "bruthas" will try to get your woman, but most I know wont. You just got to know a better class of brothers.

Plenty of white predators and Mexican Sanchos out there too, but most guys of any group just aint like that. OldBear

Black_Dragon_PrincessBlack_Dragon_Princessover 10 years ago
Anonymous!!!!

The fool in this story was like the brothas I used to date before I got with my husband who is white! They all wanted some skanky flat ass white ho!!!! As a black woman, lemme tell you that I love my sweetie and his BWC!!!!! ;3

sugnasugnaover 10 years ago
Moral of the Story...

is not about black and white race relations, it is about trust and fidelity. Start by not trusting anyone and routinely verifying fidelity. Human being are human! They are not trustworthy, their egos constantly lead them astray. So, yes even with your spouse, you are best to follow my advice and forget about trust, keep and eye on them and investigate periodically to avoid being fooled by dopey turncoat out for an ego massage or a jump to a new partner. Over time, you will come to know behavior and what is within the range of their personality. If they like to flirt a lot, if they like to touch a lot, if they share family intimacies with their friends - they will cheat. If they are secretive, if they want to keep their finances separate, if they have a bag packed and one foot out the door - they will cheat. If they compartmentalize their lives and keep you out of their workplace, they see their friends without you - they will cheat. Much of this you can see coming before marriage, so take the warnings and get out of there. Good people do not go bad overnight, ever. If they smell like shit now, it is only because you denied it in the past.

javmor79javmor79about 10 years ago
@cantbuymy

I agree with the anonymous commenter. It is insulting to black people. Of all of the stories in the Loving Wives section, how many stories actually have an intelligent black character? I have only read ONE. Most of the time, we are big dicked rapists who wants to bang a white woman because it gives us some kind of value. Why wouldn't that be insulting? I have NEVER done the things that these characters do, and I have slept with women of a few different races.

It is a cliché that is overused. Just like the white guy with the little dick. I do like to avoid stories like this. Cheating wives is a bit of turn on, but cuckolding and black bulls are so overdone that it doesn't even have the same impact. I do feel that we (black people) get a bad rep in these stories.

And I also find it hard to believe that of all of the kids in COLLEGE, the white guy was the only one who tried hard. That may be true in a lot of high schools, but usually the ones who are paying for college are doing so because they have some ambition. The fact that the school needed this white guy to attend because "no one would give it funding because it was all black" is beyond stupid and not even close to reality.

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
YAWWWWWWWN!!*

I have read this storyline maybe 500 times before. It's just getting boring.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsalmost 10 years ago
still

Stupid that he throws the divorce papers in the trash.

Does he still want to be married to her ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Smart guy

Excellent mostly,but why the divorce paper thing,makes not a lick of sense for an obviously smart guy ,and makes it a lesser story.

It just doesn't fit or make any sense at all.

KarenEKarenEover 9 years ago
Blackmail

It's become an over-used trope here that the wife makes one mistake, then compounds it by acceding to blackmail, often doing MORE under the threat of blackmail than what they are being blackmailed for.

It's like paying $10,000 blackmail to cover up the theft of $1,000.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
1 star

stick with the intelligent peoples,,not savages

virtualatheistvirtualatheistover 9 years ago
Not all...

black cocks are huge.

Not all black men rape drugged/drunk white women.

Not all black men blackmail women.

Why was the white student the only one working and made de facto leader of study group?

A vagina doesn't stretch out beyond all reasonable use after being fucked with a huge cock... It can pass a fucking baby for fuck sake!

Too many tropes, too many clichés.

Oh and a white man calling a black man a nigger in a predominantly black area who DOESN'T get his face pushed in?

shadowdustershadowdusterabout 9 years ago
Blacks do not have large dicks

Blacks do not have any morals. But they have smaller than adverage size dicks, if they do have a larger than adverage size one they normaly can not get them up. Why do people keep up this lie going.

krosis666krosis666almost 9 years ago
Good to know

Good old fashioned RACISM is still alive and kicking! The only thing missing from some of the comments is a pillowcase with two misaligned holes cut in it!

All we need now, are some jack-booted Nazis marching down the street, some crappy old fashioned music, a few camps, and the 'wonderful' 1940's will be back for the whole world to enjoy, all over again!

carvohicarvohialmost 9 years ago
Golly jeepers!

Was this story filled with stereotypical nonsense? For sure!

Was it loaded with grammatical errors? Without a doubt!

Was it fun and entertaining? Absolutely!

Did I give it a five? Indubitably!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Shadowduster: I am Black have a large cock and I'm straight but I make

straight WHite Men suck it a lot. Its easy, just smoke a couple of joints, drink some beer and then playback one of my home made pon videos with a WHite Girl sucking my dick. Then the WHite Guys ask to suck it! Ha ha ha! It always works! Ne White Woman said I cant do it with her husband. I sent her cellphone pictures. She came over and said suck it and put it in me, fag! But I told him she made the bet and he wanted to kick her ass because now he was addicted, to that Big Black Cock!

sinsational83sinsational83over 8 years ago
Not bad

krosis666 you must be black. But it's true, it seems that black guys main priority in life is to screw as many white woman as they can. Their damn dick size ( the big ones anyway ) shows their brain size, it seems like, the ones with big dicks can only deduce the fact that their only recourse is to impress white women with their size of dick because they know they don't have the intellect to impress them in any other way. Now I know it seems like I'm a racist but truly I am not. However, I feel that any white woman who mates with a black is used trash. I have black friends, good friends, and none of them ever thought about screwing a white woman. But they are also very intelligent. The only thing that this story tells me is that black guys don't think much of their black women out there, or maybe the black women are intelligent enough to stay away from the dumb ass guys that think that their so-called big dick makes them better than other people. Now as far as the story goes, I found it to be pretty good reading. good job well worth the 4 stars I gave it. Just so you people know....... my doctor who I truly RESPECT and TRUST is black AND also A WOMAN ( A damn good looking woman ) so you people cant accuse me of being a racist. But I do feel that white women should stay with white guys and black women should be taking care of their black men. the world doesn't need any more zebras running around here. We have enough. SORRY but that's the way I feel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
The most racist, stereotypical piece of shit I've ever read.

Sir Puff is a piece of shit. Just race baiting to stir up racial hatred. Carvohi is another racist piece of shit. Anyone who gives this anything but a one deserves for everyone to go to their story page and give them ones across the board. That's what I'm going to to. I won't forget either one of these pieces of shit and I'm going to be writing stories to embarrass them. The two of you are an embarrassment to the human race. Hopefully, you don't pass on your genes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Oh really now????????????

So its only when a black man steals a white wife and gets away with it that its okay right??? When the white husband gets revenge on the black man its suddenly racist right???? The black man can do nothing wrong right????????

Fuck that bull shit!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Racist shit

Truly pathetic.

mmk778mmk778almost 8 years ago
hello

i agreed its so racist an d if that white boy don't need that white women any more why don't just singed paper and move on

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
3 stars

Your black on white stories are a bit 2 dimensional.

In reality, black men aren't naturally bigger than others.

My family is mixed heritage so we don't put up with stupid racist shit or stereotypes from anyone.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Really?

This story is chock full of stereotypes and complete bullshit! I'm a black male and have never dated a white woman in my life, nor have any desire to. It's just a personal preference. Dude, seek help! Also, the white guy throwing out the n- word like that in the real world would have either had him laid low or ostracized by that group of black males that he'd purported to be friends with.

tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
A COLLEGE GRAD

acting like a teen-age adolescent, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Unfortunate ring of truth

There are a lot of VERY racist Black people with bad attitudes. Enough that would sucker punch a man who tried to give them a hand up just because he was White. Those kind of people tend to fail at life and then blame all of their self-inflicted wounds on racism. Much easier than owning up to being an asshole.

JbRobertssonJbRobertssonalmost 7 years ago
Is Jim supposed to be a man in this story???

Carol, the female office manager, shows up and shoves her way into his house? Throws him towards the stairs, yelling at him to, "Get your ass upstairs and take a shower..."? Then, because he "knew it was useless to argue with her...", he does everything she orders him to do. Well Jim, that wasn't an argument; it was a femdom ass-whupping, sugar britches - and you lost.

At the end of this nightmarish story, some chick slaps him in the face and chews him out; so what's our hero Jim do? He runs after her and begs her for a date! Seriously? Well maybe if your wife grows tired of all her boyfriends, she can come spank your little tushie and then you'll be begging her to take you back so you can become the wimpy cuckold you're meant to be! Why don't you grow a pair and pretend like you've got some testosterone in your body? Candy ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Black cock and white pussy

This shit really escalated in the sixties. Think Heidi Klum, OJ Simpson. How did it work out for those stupid blond bitches. The biggest joke is Kim "watch me give a blowjob"

Kardashian.

MightyHornyMightyHornyover 6 years ago
Well... that was disappointing!

At the very beginning of this tale, the narrator/author essentially asked the following question: why do black men always try to bed white women?

Here's the obvious answer: because white women are super easy.

Easier than black chicks, Asian girls or Latinas. White girls are known to be more promiscuous than any of those female groups, regardless of a man's race (they won't let something like 'marriage vows' or even 'same parents' get in the way of a good lay). They're also known to be more submissive (no talk back from those broads, unless they don't mind talking to the hand!); more sex-crazed and depraved (at a minimum, borderline sex addicts), which means you'll eventually get that anus, if you just push hard enough for it, and they won't mind you setting/pimping them up for a train for some of your friends... or the hobos done the streets; and yes indeed, they're always OK with birthing little bastards for you, even if you don't want to take care of them! Oh, and did I mention they have their own money? They have their own money or, better yet, the dough their husband give them, so you don't have to paid for shit - hell, sometimes, they'll paid YOU for the privileges of cuckolding their men! So, if white girls happen to be near black guys, like it or not, it's definitely on: those goddamn hung bastards won't be able to stop themselves from trying to get their huge things as far inside those sluts as humanly possible, and you just know those cumdumps aren't used to dealing with anything as big as what's they're packing! So, when one of those skanks starts grinding on one of those sonsofbitches, especially the married ones who only were used to tiny white dicks throughout their whole lives... of course they'll open their legs willingly for those big black studs - hello!?!? Haven't you paid attention to half the stories posted on LIT yet? That's some real life shit, sons!!!

... What - too much generalization? Enough with all the baseless stereotypes? I thought that was the name of the game, around here... 'Done with that? Good.

This is undoubtedly one of the worst stories left here by the usually reliable Slirpuff - a little ditty chuck full of racism, gullibility, whining and general patheticness... made even worst by the fact it may actually be 'based on a true story' - oh joy, this could be for real! 'Must be the reason why it was so unoriginal (take everything related to race out of the story, and what you end up with is a very basic cheating wife tale that was already written and posted numerous times - a lot of them way better then this one - around here), but it doesn't excuse how unappealing, on every level, the whole ordeal ended up being. I mean, even Jim and Di's very graphic coupling was boring as fuck. Given how banal the story turned out to be, it's quite unsurprising that the bigote stand it took is impossible to ignore - bad enough we had to go through Jim's initial rant, which had very little to do with what ultimately happen to him (if what he bitched about was true, the why didn't the attendees introduce Rick as a hero when he showed up at that last party? Why did he ended up kicked out of it and savagely beaten outside? Didn't he represent his race properly by cuckolding that white boy - wasn't it the point of the whole thing?), but even the little, insignificant racist jabs were starting to become bothersome, like, say, that whole classroom scene where Jim became uncomfortable at being the only Caucasian present, which, for some reason, greatly amused his boss Carole...

By the way: do you know what a black man call a room full of white folks, expect for him? A ROOM.

Anyway, I know that nobody asked for my opinion about it, but here's the two individuals responsible for the death of this marriage - and, right off the bat, might as well tell you that I do not hold Rick responsible here (sure, he's a true piece of shit, but he's also a very convenient scapegoat; if the following two morons were on top of their game, whatever he was trying to pull would have never worked):

Diane: ... obviously. Given how turned on and wet she ended up being after her first encounter with Rick, it's very doubtful she had much of a problem following him to a room the next time they saw each other, regardless of how drunk she truly was. As for her continuous infidelity afterward, calling complete bullshit on the whole blackmail claim - the slut was so into getting that BBC, she couldn't help, but pointed out how huge it was and how unbelievable she managed to take the whole thing in... while supposedly trying to apologize to her husband for her cheating ways! A true skank and a half, that girl...

Jim: ... hell yeah. There's a whole lot of instants where you clearly see how much of a whining, little wimp good old Jimmy-boy is - needing Carole to kick his ass back to work; having three different people convincing him to finish his last TWO (???) classes to get his degree, when it was the only sane move he could make; getting slap into asking his latest girlfriend out... But nothing showed it more than his complete inaptitude in dealing with learning that some asshole grind his cock on his woman during a party. Disregard for a moment the great sex he'll eventually get out of this indiscretion... how could he possibly let his wife dance with the same douchebag at another gathering? Any real men would think the same thing: if that bozo shows up near my girl again... we're having a conversation. Either with words, with fists or with a baseball bat, it doesn't matter - we're going to talk. And, after that talking, the sonofabitch will know he better go grind on the nearest tree, and stay clear of my woman from now on, unless he doesn't value his health. Who give a shit what anyone, even Keith, say - his dick better not touch any part of my girl's body... or else. But, not only didn't Jim do exactly that, but he simply left Di near the horny bastard... with a pack of booze. Might as well just say out loud to anyone in earshot "please fuck my horny, drunk wife!"

So what do with end up with? Two people who obviously had no business getting married, being separated. All and all, very predictable... and what the hell that whole 'throwing the divorce papers in the garbage' nonsense was all about? What - do you want her back, Jim? Is that the whole point of it? SMDH... moron. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
laughing all the way

Little ol redneck me has bedded a dozen black females...they all laughed about the bbc myth. Having screwed numerous black males they would know what was hanging. Seems little honky me was not only longer but also much thicker than the bros they had banged

One had white female roommate and one night while I was being entertained in the black girl's bed, the roommate had a black guy in hers. We burst out laughing when the roommate kept yelling at black lover to quit fooling around and stick it all in. Finally he yelled at her that it was all in...after a shocked response of ''you've got to be kidding'' that room got very quiet

timrivtimrivover 6 years ago

Still lives his wife otherwise he would have signed them right away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Lol this story brought out the worst in everyone

Everyone just lost their shit in the comments. Some of them even talking about stuff that wasn't even in the story. No one said those black people were lazy, they just didn't get the material and needed some help.

It wasn't racist, Rick acted like a crappy person and everyone too busy crying racist. Jim worked hard and thought he made friends when called him a white brother. Well his friends realized they let him down and had his back the 2nd time around.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Stupid damn story

Forget the contents of the story. You left it completely unfinished. I hate lazy authors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

dumb bastard divorice and move on or take her back

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
timriv shut your fucking mouth

we all know you have no spine you pathetic idiot ,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Anon on 6/13 says Timv has no spine?

This is why I have zero tolerance, compassion or care for all you "anon's" out there. You're gutless cowards. Be an adult; get a free account, and put your name on it- own that shit like an adult.

Only children hide behind keyboards

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Timriv has no fucking spine, how's that Cogsley?

tazz317tazz317almost 6 years ago
NEITHER COLOR NOR RACE DEFINES A CHEATER

either one has them and in spades" pun" TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Conceptual vs. Actual

There are some stories that are better in concept than in execution. An exploration of societal differences between races is not an inherently bad idea.

Unfortunately, this lacked any subtlety at all and just fed into a tremendous amount of stereotyping. Indolent black college students. Black men with prodigious genitals. Black men who have an overwhelming drive to go after white women. Women who throw reason out the window when the option for a large dick opens up. Sassy black women who casually dole out violence. White savior providing structure and intellectual rigor to black men.

I'm usually a fan of Slirpuffs work. Not this time around.

etchiboyetchiboyover 5 years ago
I personally know of two similar incidents like this...

... with black guys chasing white girls. One in high school (though the dude was a really nice guy, but only dated white girls, but being a nice guy can’t fault the girls dating him), and one right after college when I worked in a big restaurant. The restaurant deal was I knew the girl (she worked with me), who only dated black guys, and I’d met a couple when they came in to pick her up after work. One guy played football at the university (and seemed ok, very middle class), and the other guy (whom I only met once and for like five minutes) was a thug.

But the corollary was in high school one of my wrestling coaches only dated asian girls. And a white girl I was friends with (whose first boyfriend was white and dropped her after taking her virginity) whose second boyfriend was asian, only dated asian guys from that point on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This story had a few cliches and a lot of stereotypes. I didn’t much care for it. Someone else said it, Slirpuff’s stories are usually pretty good. This one wasn’t. .D.

DiscoveringUtopiaDiscoveringUtopiaover 5 years ago
3* turned into 5* when...

Rick had his "accident".

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really, really?!?

Phuq you you racist piece of shit! She cheated with a guy who just happens to be black, she didn’t cheat because he was black. For using the n-word, phuq off and die you miserable, racist, douche bag a••hole! If you have an inferiority complex when it comes to black men that’s YOUR issue! Don’t try and make it the issue of the entire black, male populace. Your preconceived notions and bullshit statements like black jive talk are ludicrous! What the phuq is black, jive talk?!? You phuqing suck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
If you don't want people to make judgements on you try learning to spell

@ anon 12/07/18

It's 'fuck' not phuck, you ignorant fuck.

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