All Comments on 'Dream Come True'

by 2CHaNces

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MochaMistressMochaMistressover 14 years ago
Next chapter?

Sooo looking forward to reading the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keep going!

Keep going with the next chapter. I really want to know what happens next.

LilMami07LilMami07over 14 years ago
Nice start

Im really looking forward to the next chapter. This could turn into something good. :)

**lilmami07**

mekakymekakyover 14 years ago
Great

Great start, can't wait to read the next chapter

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 14 years ago
LOVED the story

You are FANTASTIC.....wonderful writing.....I am not even bothered by the lack of eroticism you write so cleverly. I totally believe the person. She is real.

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 14 years ago
LOVED the story

You are FANTASTIC.....wonderful writing.....I am not even bothered by the lack of eroticism you write so cleverly. I totally believe the person. She is real.

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 14 years ago
Please Continue!

Can't wait to see what you have in store for these two.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 14 years ago
wow

yes you have to continue with this story wow loving it

IndianChocolateIndianChocolateover 14 years ago
sounds real good

this sound really great so far. keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
your story

Pleasee continue this story!!!

romanticbunnyromanticbunnyover 14 years ago
Continue it please!!!!!

Wow. This sounds like me. Though I'm sill waiting to meet that dream guy. But I had a dream just like that last year around Christmas.

I'm in the same place Taryn...minus the sleeping with the ex. lol. Long boring story short...I hope you continue this. I'd like to read at least one happy dream come true. =]

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Beginning...where's the rest?? More please

Loved this beginning. I would really like to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
you had me @ The Script

Loved them as MYTOWN, still love them now. I'll definitely keep reading to find out how coo coo psycho Cydney manages to woo Taryn.

LunanoireLunanoireover 14 years ago
This is Hilarious

Please continue.

theonlinestalkertheonlinestalkerover 14 years ago
more please

i want to know what happens next. very unique story. please more!

grunabonagrunabonaover 14 years ago
I like it

A little more editing wouldn't hurt, but I like it.

Cinndney25Cinndney25over 14 years ago
MORE PLEASE

this story i unique i loved it all and cant wait for next next chapter

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 14 years ago
promising....

:) can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great start

Thanks for a great read.

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 14 years ago
ummm

this is unusually, yet very intriguing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Okay,,,,,,

Cydney is really creepy and the spelling of his name annoys me. (sadface)

mimi186mimi186almost 12 years ago
You had me at Before the Worst

I love the script too much to not continue!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
Spur of the moment

I decided to give you a try and I'm really liking this already and the title doesn't hurt either.

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