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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/31/09

Too brief

Interesting, but confusing........ If Harry had left GE, why would they want him to come back? Harry doesn't like his boss, but why does he shoot the others, who he seems to like and respect? Just seems like it could have been fleshed out a bit to make it more believable?

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by user11011/18/12

and who the hell is Tom Sutherland?

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