All Comments on 'High Adventure on the High Seas'

by AzPilot

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A made-for-movie story line

Excellent narrative, you have elevated the the level of writing on this forum. Thank you. If I were a young man, experiencing the horrors or WWII, what would I have done? I'll not soon forget this story, a man in the twilight of his years, contemplating, "what happened to all the girls".

masked_authormasked_authorover 14 years ago
Well-told!

Non-erotic literature doesn't get much of a shout on this website sometimes, I think. Half the beauty in a story is watching the buildup or reading the narrative that is placed along with the kink. You've done a wonderful job telling this story, and I was along with you every step of the way. Excellent work!

naughtEgirlnaughtEgirlabout 14 years ago

I have to agree with your previous commenters, that was well done. Thanks!

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