All Comments on 'Safety Net'

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CAP811CAP811about 14 years ago
Well now

Hmm, okay, this was certainly a different take on a time-worn theme. But I liked the writing style, and how it made an interesting point about possibilities when the path of a man and a woman cross.

AzPilotAzPilotabout 14 years ago
I chuckled all the way through it. What a nice change from a mundane subject and you did it well.

Very well, I might add. I expect there'll be a bunch of, "Why didn't I think of that?" from readers. Count me in there too. I'm still chuckling and saying thank you for the amusement ride.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Ha Ha Ha Ha!

We have all been there and done that, or not, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
witty

Oh that reminds me of several incidents of my youth.

Well done!

Stella_OmegaStella_Omegaabout 14 years ago
like a poetry exercise

And very well done, too!

The last line, though-- I don't think it's even necessary.

My IMy Iabout 14 years agoAuthor
@ Stella...

I disagree. Andy must justify his inaction due to his lack of confidence some way. The sour grapes defense is always easiest to swallow.

My_I

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent!

Liked it a lot!

Satisfying antidote!

williammyruswilliammyrusover 5 years ago
Hopper's Nighthawks

That's the story in the mood of this painting.

Sadly, too close to the truth.

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