by LovelyFeathers01
the wonderful slow sensual build up, the totally perverse plot this kid hatches.. more please
I like it. Slow, methodical and descriptive. This has real potential. You can count me as a fan!
Story is flat so far, she would have reacted someway more than eating his cum. Expand on the story, turn her into a sex toy for the boy.
In this excellent story the gifted author examines one aspect of this curiosity---"How does my boy's semen taste?" A very natural urge of mothers---after all, all that creamy sperm sloshing around in her young son's balls is the best sign of his virility and manliness, and it makes their mommy-cunt real wet. The boy in the story sets the bait for his mother, a huge white dose of his spooge on a photo mom's bound to see. Sure enough, mom gobbles it up and swallows it, not missing a precious drop. All sons love to see their mother with their creamy semen on her lips and tongue, maybe trickling down her chin. Best of all, a boy wants to unload his hot young balls up where his load belongs---right up his mother's twat. Look, that twat is the kid's own damn birth canal! It's every boy's natural RIGHT to give his mommy a twatful from his brimming young balls.
I will check on your page to see.
Why would someone guess you're southern just from those few paragraphs?
I liked your story, it was a little short and ended abruptly but still OK.
That was the dumbest thing I have ever read on here and there have been some bad ones but this is the worst.