by LuckySon
Disappointing sequel !! After the 1st story about how Mother and Son looked at each other, I expected more about them getting to know each other "better", and not be forced to read about a "revenge" robbery. You could continue or end this series with the 3 principals getting it on willingly.
The worst written story ever! You should be banned from the site based solely on inability to write!
You had a decent premise (although I'd have submitted it to the non-consent category), but you just killed your own story with poor writing. Please use an editor in the future.
This so called author has no imagination.
The father and son should have their cocks in each other's asses because they are both pussies for not resisting this trash.
The crooks wouldn't be able to get into such a secured structure to start with.
I expected so much more. This could have went somewhere special.
The original had a good premise, but this chapter blew it for me.
Well anyway thanks for writing! Maybe next time.
maybe I'm the dissenting opinion because I thought as a concept I liked what was going on. Just the actual execution left something to be desired.
while the robbers were at it, they should have made the boy fuck his mother. Getting sucked off by mom is fine, but the boy should've shoved his big cock up between his mother's legs and shot his big load of creamy sperm right up her cunt. Maybe fucked a baby up where he was once a baby.
MAY YOU SUFFER SUCH FATE AS YOUR MOTHER DID FOR WRITING SUCH A STORY. THERE IS NO DOUBT THAT LAW ENFORCEMENT IS STUDYING THIS STORY TO DETERMINE IF THEY HAVE ANY SUCH CASES OPEN.
Absolutely terrible. Flow sucks. Sentence structure sucks. Wasted my time. That sucks.
Fucking stupid. Terrible story. Author couldn't remember if the mother was male or female. Author's grasp of the language proves that English is obviously not their first language.