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2008 Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Harryin VA04/16/10

UM... turning into a JPB story

I Guess it is Just me BUT I dont see how " training her" to be a submissive changes what she did for the relatively short period they have been married

21 men and another woman over the course of several years is hard to over look.

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by Anonymous04/16/10

a bit short

I like the chapters a bit longer. Writing is fluent. Not sure about the storyline though. I'll wait and see for final opinion.

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by The Navigator04/16/10

May be, maybe not

I don't think I'll last to the end of this. Reading snippets doesn't do much for me. This storyline is already getting a bit tedious. Certainly not the quality of "Tank's Farewell".

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by Anonymous04/16/10

Still on track,

yes this part was quite short. I hope to get longer bits once the action starts. Keep it up!

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by Eric_Shift04/16/10

loving it so far

glad it's going to be a long one

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by Anonymous04/16/10

How Does She Go

From being a cold hearted bitch who doesn't even want him to touch her cause she loves Mark, than 30 minutes later doing anything he says? I must have missed something, this seems more sci-fi than anything. Why was she fucking all these guys and how could he have not known? Why would he want her at all?

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by Anonymous04/16/10

got stupid

the story got very stupid.

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by bruce2204/16/10

Nothing very erotic here.

It looks like the author could have done it with three chapters.
I am only here because I ususally like the author's romance or loving wife tales. But he does like multiple partner marraige and if I had known.....

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by mover04/16/10

HOT-HOT-HOT

WOW, I'm hooked! To the naysayers: It is a S-T-O-R-Y!

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by sexmate04/17/10

Okay! Lets see where this goes

On to the next chapter!

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by Anonymous05/15/10

Im hooked,

line and sinker.

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by Anonymous11/06/10

I am loving this story

And can't wait to see where it will go..

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by ushergal05/07/11

this is

how you show that your man

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by WajaLover11/10/11

Loved It!

It was very good. I'm so glad you had Kaye get back together with them.

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