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I Just Didn't Want To Hear It

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by Anonymous

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by energystar04/28/10

nice

funny because it was so real.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

Your best yet!

More sex next time.

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by size14shoe04/28/10

more sex?

I can usually see it coming but this one had me fooled. Terrific story, Answering another comment about needing more sex: You can only ride one bike at a time. LOL

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by Harddaysknight04/28/10

The thing I like most

about a Slirpuff story is the husbands are always reglar guys. In the stories most of us write, we try to make the husband even tempered, a good provider, a considerate lover, etc. Slirpuff makes his husband charatcers partial assholes, or at least flawed to some extent. I suppose it is closer to real life, much as we men hate to admit it. The husband in this story did some foolish and selfish things, but don't we all? Mistakes like "your" when it should be "you're" are distracting, but the husbands in the stories give the feeling they are flesh and blood.

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by stillstrokin04/28/10

Straight pipes always seam to let everyone know you're cumming

Your story was a fun ride in itself. Makes you want to twist the throttle.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

a story

this was a story about a guy who wanted his own way about everything if i was his spouse i shoot myself.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

Well, That Was Great.

I am a little pissed cause I sold my bike but my wife rode with me for a long time even thou she didn't like it all that much. But after some friends were badly hurt riding we decided to try sailing, but at least we are doing it together, thanks.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

Great story

Same theme, different bikes, currently housing:
2007 GSXR1000
2010 CBR1000
2001 Hayabusa

Oh yeah!!!

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by The Navigator04/28/10

Hurrah!

Slirpuff, you just get better and better!

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by APeacefulPlaceTx04/28/10

A fun ride!

I enjoyed this slice of life. I've been married for 41 years and I stopped being "me" and became "us" so long ago I don't even remember the change. That doesn't mean there's no fighting and friction, it just means that sometimes you have to find the line and make adjustments. She finally understood how important it was to her husband and adjusted. That she enjoyed it was just a bonus.

This sort of story is harder to do well than one full of angst, well done... however I noticed a few incorrect word choice "then" instead of "than" sort of thing. I'm so not a grammar Nazi, so if noticed them it must drive some of those folks nuts. A good editor will fix that for you and you'll have a better story.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

I hope this satisfies them, Slirpuff

though it was far too cute for my fucked up tastes. Good bike work and characterization...Mancelt.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

Great story

but Harleys are still a POS!

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by ohamanda04/28/10

Excellent

Great story, superb detail and credible people/reactions. You're damn good my friend! Amanda x

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by sexmate04/28/10

Well that was a great ride! I mean read!

Excelently told story! It had me guessing for a while !

It still bothered me that they weren't talking with each other the way a mature couple should have been doing. The tit for tat game is a slippery one that everyone that is married or has a serious relationship has experianced at one time or another. They usually don't play out very well.

I would guess you have quite a bit of experiance with motorcycles to write about them in detail like you did.

Thanks for using the pass I gave you on the last story! You used it well!

Thanks for writing!

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by Poizon6904/28/10

Well done Slirpuff

Back on form again, thanks for this story.

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by woodmanone04/28/10

Well Done Sir

Thanks for your hard work. Enjoyed the story and the suspense, nice twist. The hell with the naysayers.

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by digdaddyrich04/28/10

A good story with a good ending

Well written and thought out storyline.

A good twist for an ending.

Thanks

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by Drall04/28/10

A Great Read!

Thanks! What fun,and a happy ending!

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by muirmadra04/28/10

A Dream Come True

Great story!

I've been riding bikes since I was 15. All kinds of bikes. Rode a Harley forever but, after turning 60, retired to a Gold Wing. In all that time, I've never been able to get my wife involved. Should that ever happen, which I sincerely doubt, it would be a dream come true.

Thanks for the tale.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

He's an asshole

with anger management issues.

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by victoriangent04/28/10

Rebut to Anon

He has no anger management problems. She has a pussy management problem.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

Liked it

my lady, at first, didnt like ridng on my bike. it took time. but now she loves it.

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by bruce2204/28/10

The Title was nicely ambiguous

and I was quite worried about where the story was going.... Put came out nicely real and loving.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

ride baby ride

Definitely a nice story about suspicious behavior thought about each other. Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

Like watching paint dry

The descriptions of the bikes were laboriously long. In the end, this was a biking story not a Loving Wives story. The sex scenes seemed so out of place that they too were boring.

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by jasonnh04/28/10

A fun story

I enjoyed it although, like another commenter, I am not that into motorcycles so it was a little much for me in those areas. But I just skimmed through. There were some real good views of people with differing areas of interest. How about husbands that play golf every weekend and the wifes that have no appreciation for the game? I think smart spouses learn that they can't be with each other 24/7 and appreciate everything that their partner does. Obviously he is a bit of a fanatic and his zeal at some times causes more tension. But people are like that. I'm surprised it took his wife that long to figure out to either let it go or to get on board with him. In many ways he was extremely accommodating of her, trying any way he could to include her but she just had her mind made up. One thing I didn't like was the cutting off from sex. I know women play this game but I have no patience for it. I think that's one thing that would lead me to cheat, using sex as a weapon. No way. Of course then I'd be planning on a divorce pretty quickly. Luckily this story turned out better than that.

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by Anonymous04/28/10

Nice comeback after the previous effort!

Good story! It was a nice rebound for you from the last story that you posted. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. Ohio, USA

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by mike271004/28/10

enjoyed it

I enjoy riding and enjoyed the story. Goes to show you people need to communicate with each other or it can go to hell real quick.
Thanks for the story. Mike from Texas

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by FireFox5904/28/10

Nice

Enjoyed this one Slirpuff. THANKS.

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by gatorhermit04/28/10

Good story

Could have almost been in the humor section. I really liked the end. Thanks SP for a very good ride I mean read.

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by chytown04/28/10

Good Story!!!!!!

One fine read my friend. "Thank You"

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by Anonymous04/28/10

A great read!

And a fine ride as well. This was a well written story, I enjoyed it muchly!

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by Pistolpackinpete04/28/10

Good read....

the ending saved it from just being run of the mill.

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by Harryin VA04/29/10

HDK can you explain that amazingly stupid remark ?

you actually think in slirpuff's stories the husband are " regular guys?

REALLY? so like his last story where the husband has to deal with a absurd argument that cheating while dating in college is the same thing as cheating 27 years later.. . is then beaten up and almost killed by the wife's new boyfriend....

then of course forgives her ...

THAT husband comes across as a regular guy ?

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by Harryin VA04/29/10

Husband is a douche bag and the wife's change of heart makes NO sense.

The husband is totally at fault here. I lost track of How many Motorocycles he actually own sold and bought while married.

Once again the author has made yet ANOTHER male/ husband character
that comes across as another self centered fucking idiot ... and guy who appears to be not quite smart to be accepted into the local Tea Party chapter.

His Ploy or little game that he plays.... of LYING to his wife by omission... is very teenage like. Trading in his car for a bike then trading THAT is for a different bike and never telling sandy what he was going to do OR even worse totally ignoring any concerns she might have... tells of a real douche bag .

and his connection with Cindy was totally over the line. Cindy telling her friends and colleagues at work that steve is screwing her and he is an animal in bed...waaaaaay over the line

Frankly by the end of the story I hoped she was fucking some one else!

The wife's SUDDEN conversion to Liking or loving Motorcycles is pathetic and not in anyway beleiveable. These statement all amde on page 3 ... are pretty intense and extreme.

"Steve, read my lips, you're not going without me and I'm not getting on the back of your bike, so deal with it."

Steve, you either stay her with me and get my warmth or you can get all the warmth you want off your damn bike engine, it's your choice."

Steven Moore, you go tomorrow and it'll be a cold day in hell before see or touch this body again."

then suddenly she wants to ride?

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by Talenhawk04/29/10

Husband was a selfish jerk

I like the ending but I didn't like the guy. I don't think he should give up riding, but the bid "fuck off" he gave his wife when buying new bikes was wrong. She showed a lot of love by compromising learning to ride and getting a bike. At what point did he EVER compromise. His whole life is all about him and his desires. Selfish.

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by xtremedd04/29/10

Whew! You had me going on this story. Great guy and gal story.

S,

Just a great guy and gal story. You had (us) me going on this to the point I was not sure how / where it was going to end up. Your stories get gooder an' gooder, S. Loved it.

xtremedd

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by Ducky705/01/10

Great story liked the ending and the new bikes.

Let keep the in fighting going you guys. No sense on just commenting on the story. Lets pick on each other for a change.

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by oldwayne05/19/10

It was a nice story.

While not the usual LW type story, it was an enjoyable read. Thank you for having written it.

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by SilverWolf7875407/29/10

Now Steve needs to take up dancing...

I used to have two left feet too. But a good dance teacher and some practice will solve that problem pretty quickly. I am now a pretty good dancer. It sure is a lot of fun and it gives us both something do for both ourselves and is a great social outlet for us both. This would also solve the problem seen so many times in "Loving Wives" stories of the guy watching his girl dancing with everyone but himself because he does not know how to dance. If you don't like your girl dancing with all the other guys, then learn to dance. Why give the other men a chance with your lady? Get off your lazy ass and learn something for her for a change. You will find it is a lot of fun.

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by 0649d09/17/10

marriage is hard work

even at the age of 50-something. Thank goodness they could work through it even then. Good thing she wasn't too hard-headed to not let him have his fun. What's an old man supposed to do? Men in general belong to the outdoors

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by Anonymous11/28/10

Great story!

Thanks, as an "old man" and a biker ride a long, long time ago I could really relate to the story.

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by VickieTern12/09/10

Fun

I don't know if you noticed. He may enjoy the kinds of sex he has with his wife but what he really and truly loves thinking about and doing is the rides available with different bikes on different trips, especially with the bike he's currently married to! Interesting that she took up the same kind of rival, tailored to her own specs. And it's sort of nice that they'll live happily alongside each other forever after.

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by RePhil03/23/11

Are you ever going to write a bad story?

Gem after gem. We do appreciate you sharing your stories with us

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by DWornock07/27/11

1*

Just a story about old folks.

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by Coffeemugg03/08/12

Grease

Reminds me of Sandy in the movie Grease.

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by cantbuymy05/26/12

very well done

kept it up - liked the switch for the wife - yes - a good read. 5

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by Rockyderek_ca07/23/12

Hey??

And what about the new sex position and unusual level of enthusiasm from wifey?? Where'd that come from.... Said He... Suspisciously.

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by Anonymous09/30/12

Babes

You are an excellent writer but in every story you write you call all your women
Babes. (Every story).
that is really irritating.

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by betrayedbylove02/03/13

Wonderful

A loving married couple not cheating. It's always a wonderful thing.

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