All Comments on 'College Break Road Trip'

Two mighty hot girls. Why didn't I find any like Riley or Sara when I was in college? Erotic threesome story.

A great series in the making I figure! Very good, I love the girls, please write sequels!

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Very well written and good flow. Nice to see you are continuing it.

Great work on the threesome angle. Nothing a guy loves more than hot sex with two young, beautiful girls at the same time. Hope you continue with subsequent chapters. Thanks for writing.

What a fantastic story. I thought my first time was unbelieveable (she was two years older and introduced me to the joys of cunnlingus - so she could get off after I orgasamed in record time), but to have two women as understanding as the ones in this story is unbelievable.

What a great story. But I'd love to read about Ryan having sex with Sara later the next morning as well.

The girls may have felt safe because he said he was a virgin, but that wouldn't keep Ryan from getting any of the sorts of STDs available from young women who would bed a virtual stranger.

This is fiction make-believe land where nobody catches STDs except as part of the plot. Or gets knocked up

Am old country boy, I would go out to the barn and feed and just lay around listening to the rain on the roof.

Great story, plenty of tease and good amount of description

Great portrayal of a guy driving with 2 sexy and mischievous women.

The premise if obvious and predictable, but the execution was impeccable.

Great depth to the characters and suspense. Even if you were pretty sure the stuff was going to happen.

Thanks and keep writing

Formulaic.

i knew this was too good to end this soon

Great buildup, but the ending was not satisfying. Maybe they should have been talking about Sara's wants. Or what the girls planned for Ryan tomorrow. Or anything except that sudden dead end.