Loved this chapter! Its progressing very nicely. I love the characters also.
Will e definitely looking for the next chapter to come out. I think you're a really good writer and am loving your other story as well. Please dont wait too long to get the next part out! :)
u cannot stop there...what happens next???
Please keep writing I love stories that dnt go straight to the sex
Please write more, your story has alot of promise.
I have to know. What is the time period that all of this is taking place. And how old is the boy? Please continue this story, I'm looking forward to more.
i agree with others.....please write more....!
Of course, Kyle is Conall's mate and will eventually be turned. This story needs to be updated immediately. I hate starting a good tale only to have the author decide not to finish it.
i like these two...
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