Loved this chapter! Its progressing very nicely. I love the characters also.
Will e definitely looking for the next chapter to come out. I think you're a really good writer and am loving your other story as well. Please dont wait too long to get the next part out! :)
Please keep writing I love stories that dnt go straight to the sex
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Anonymous12/13/10
More please
Please write more, your story has alot of promise.
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Anonymous01/19/11
Love this story, but...
I have to know. What is the time period that all of this is taking place. And how old is the boy? Please continue this story, I'm looking forward to more.
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Anonymous05/10/11
want to hear more!!
i agree with others.....please write more....!
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Anonymous01/16/12
Mating
Of course, Kyle is Conall's mate and will eventually be turned. This story needs to be updated immediately. I hate starting a good tale only to have the author decide not to finish it.
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Very Nice
Loved this chapter! Its progressing very nicely. I love the characters also.
Will e definitely looking for the next chapter to come out. I think you're a really good writer and am loving your other story as well. Please dont wait too long to get the next part out! :)
getting better
u cannot stop there...what happens next???
Omg
Please keep writing I love stories that dnt go straight to the sex
More please
Please write more, your story has alot of promise.
Love this story, but...
I have to know. What is the time period that all of this is taking place. And how old is the boy? Please continue this story, I'm looking forward to more.
want to hear more!!
i agree with others.....please write more....!
Mating
Of course, Kyle is Conall's mate and will eventually be turned. This story needs to be updated immediately. I hate starting a good tale only to have the author decide not to finish it.
please finish this story
i like these two...
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