All Comments on 'Wolf Legends Ch. 01'

Well done please don't keep me waiting!

Im glad that you began this chapter with a legend/explanation to make the future chapters more clear. So far from what i can tell, it looks like a unique storyline and you have written it very well. I do hope you will continue with the next chapter(s) as soon as possible.

Goodluck!

Can not wait for more, great start with lots of great ideas.

I like the idea of your giving the background in the form of a story told to the children. Can't wait to see more of Fawn and Logan. How did Fawn end up with the People?

It was a beautifully written chapter, and a wonderful way to start. I enjoyed the soft magic of.

This is only the second time I have given feedback and I have read alot of stories on Literotica.

I hope you continue to write, whether it be erotic or not.

Your story actually had me so caught up that I did not feel disappointed at all that there wasn't a sexual element.

Brava!

This could really use an editor, mostly for punctuation. I normally wouldn't comment on punctuation (I mean, who cares if someone misses a period or comma or apostrophe if it doesn't affect the story?), but there were certain errors that sometimes actually changed the meaning of the sentence, and so I had to back up and try to figure out what you were trying to say. As I said, though, liked it a lot. Btw, "Per say" should be "per se"...it's Latin and means "Of, in, or by itself". J. ---P.S. I liked the concept enough to give it a 5, though. lol.

I thought the beginning of this story was excellent. I can see you weaving the tale. I look forward to reading more. The beginning of your story was as good as any book I've bought. I really look forward to taking this journey with you.

I Like reading/hearing about legends I think you did a great job, keep it up. I usually wait until I read the entire story before I comment but this time I had to let you know what an awesome beginning you have here; can't wait for the rest.

I agree with 'slavegirl_21', you did a fantastic job intro'n this story and it has definitely got my interest piqued. I love the weaving of a legend into modern day and how you seem to be taking the time to build a really good plot.

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