This audio is excellent! You hit a subject that so many of us guys love and fantasize about. Thank you!
This is, without any doubt, the hottest thing you have done to date! (And all of your stuff is very good!) And, by the way, where did you say your sister lives?
that was totally hot The best
thank you so much. THIS WAS HOTTT! Helped me jerk it real good. Came in loads...
Raven Baby, this is another triumph for you and you should win! I would give you a 10 if I could.
Too hot! Once again, could not finish the story for some reason.... Great job!
WOW! Only the second audio story I've read/listened to and this was even better than the first. I love the line: "She's 31 now and I like her quite a bit better. Less screaming and more lattes. " You're so bad. Outstanding story, Raven. Good luck in the contest.
Raven my sweet you have done it once again you should win no question. As for me you are the best .
This audio is the best on Literotica! Up untill now, I never told a soul that I had the fantasy of sucking the sweet milk from my mommy's tits! It's a crying shame that I can't remember how good it was when I was breastfed!!!!
Raven dear, you have to do another breastfeeding audio. Please, your baby is hungry. Don't deprive me of my milk! lol
I woud love for you to do an audio series of the breastfeeding fantasy/fetish. I loved jerking off to this one, my cock never felt so good!
Great work, Raven, you have an impressive set of skills - your writing, erotic imagination and performance are a potent combination. You took me a kinky place I don't normally go in this one and it was a very tasty experience. Keep it going, please...
The only way this story could have been better is if her breasts had dispensed diet cream soda
Your writing and story; your voice... best I have ever read and or heard; I am a guy who is highly criticial of most writers.
Not you for sure.
Think about using your voice and being able to adapt to a character for acting; best area; stage
I loved it.
You use your voice, tone, inflections, and that too hot for words damn giggle so well in this story. It just wouldn't be the same read - which is an awesome use of the format. Couple that with your amazing creativity with your content as well as all the regular writing and this is truly a tasty summer treat. Definitely it deserves to be a winner. Thanks for such an amazing listening experience.
Ive always had a fantasy along these lines, so this really hit the spot for me, one of the best audios ive ever heard, definitely a keeper.
This is a fetish of mine so very well fulfilled. You did an outstanding job in this audio. Such a lucky guy. I truly wish I were him! More please.
It seems odd sitting here writing a story and at the same time listening to yours. As always very well done. Thank you for sending me the mp3 link. I wish you the best in the contest.
Wow Raven that was the hottest story about breast feeding wow I couldnt get enough of that story.I hope you win the story contest.As Always you stories are always hot as hell and cant wait to hear more. Number one fan always! :) Aaron
Enjoyable story, beautifully written with a mood that matched the writing. Interesting plot, my interpretation of the end appears to be quite different from others expressed in the comments. Thank you.
That was hot so was the narration. Hot voice and "sound effects"! LOL
I've always fantasized about playing with milk-engorged breasts and suckling those wonderfully sensitive nipples. What an erotic, yet intimate thing to do. Thank you, it was simply amazing!
Been listening to stories for a couple of hours today. This is the one that really did it for me. So sexy, well told and what a sexy voice too.
This was defiantly a different topic... I really enjoyed listening and defiantly provided pleasure for me.. When the girl in the story cummed it was sooo realistic.
Your voice is soo tempting. Thanks for the enjoyment.
The only thing I can add is when you end the story let the reader know it is coming to an end... Also try to adjust your voice for the different characters..
But over all I really enjoyed it.. Thanks
I just masturbated listening to this very well done
This was one of the best stories ever to grace literotica. Such a sexy sexy voice.
Thanks a lot. I really needed a good lactation story to finish up my night and this was much more than I thought I could find. Very sexy voice. Made me cum like a horse on a stud farm.
Enjoyed your lactation story. Keep them coming.
Superlative story and the delivery was even better!
Truely done in superb fashion. Made me hungry for a full breast. Mmmmm.
Wonderful, sultry teasing voice. Plus tickling a naughty mild fetish of mine. The framing device of the disapproving sister's comments was a nice contrasting touch.
You created 1 of the hottest stories, audio or written. And your voice drives me wild.
Pls consider revisting this kink & any other kink.
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