All Comments on 'Why Me? Ch. 01'

too short

Sorry about the length - there are more chapters coming very soon

More, must write more

seeing a previous comment saying "too short", I needed to say that so far you are doing an excellent job and keeping the character history to an acceptable level. I'm sure future chapters might add more history, but I just hope the story isn't bogged down with it. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for the positive feedback!

I'm not usually into this type of story, but for some reason, it got my juices flowing. I would like to know more about the men who took her and why. Good first job, cant wait to read the rest of it.

Efficient and memorable. Glad to see there are lots more chapters to check out!

I need more hurry and write soon!!!

Clothes pins were a nice touch. I look forward to the next installment.

I just found your series and i just HAD to read them!! :)

Good intro btw

Need to teach her to be a good whore doing everything she is told for free. Any man any whole.

Excellent, very hot, I like it when they make 'em orgasm, but I couldn't understand what happened when they got her in the van with her legs up in the air. Surely that would have meant her skirt risen up and expose her panties but she didn't mention that embarrassment at all. Women do not like their whites exposed - R

not sex just crulty load of shit

Taken

Grey tells a quick paced account of an abduction. However if the intent is to enslave the person, shouldn't the kidnappers have qualms about damaging the merchandise?

We'll done.