by fargas111
Impssible to it in a meaningful way.....
cool little diddy . you mixed fun with political satire. Isnt it funny?! i noticed from the comments ALL us Americans are perverts! Hurrah for sex and love....... g
This is beyond repulsive in being just plain stupid. India is Hindu not Christian. There are no black nations bordering India and even if she was a coolie in Africa, Indians are not blonde with blue eyes.
Doesn't Literotica have any editors worth a keyboard delete to protect the public?
does yo mommie know your sick male humiliation need
Besides being in the wrong category ( needs to be in IR ) as everybody can see where this is going , I have to agree with some of the other posters when they say you are one sick fuck ! especially when the son is describing his mothers body , etc . This story is beyond awful . Nothing original and definitely in the wrong category , IR is where it should be as this is the same tired plot those peeps eat up . LW is a different class of reader .
India is mostly Hindu but has a large christian and Muslim population.
It seems there is a lot of deranged people out there. This "writer"is one of them. I thought they are all locked up in an asylums.
I was wrong !!!!
I'm not impressed. Not only was this story boring it had no originality. Try harder.
but not worth the time. Next time figure out a plot, then write the story.
Padre is ITALIAN for priest..this story has been copied from an american story.
But it was difficult to suspend disbelief with this one. I initially thought it was taking place in some Eastern European country, but then the Black priest came in, then he went from calling him a priest to reverend to padre, are they in Mexico or some other Latin country now? Then he calls her an Indian slut! So they're in India now since he's making reference to her saree? Help.
Anti Catholic ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write about a muslem cheating, scandalizing children and raping married women, and you can bet some towel-wearing camel jockey would track you down and may you pay for the insult to that "religion of peace" (sic!).
...and Rome keeps trying to cover up. Well documented in many countries. though there are many good priests, many are perverts and abusers. Well, that's religion for you. Author must be American. This happens in an Indian village, Indian as in India. The timid wife is described as blonde. Well gosh, must be an American author, geographic and ethnographic knowledge not being strong suits in the country south of Canada. Hot nevertheless. Thanks!
THE AUTHOR IS MOST LIKELY FROM THE MIDDLE EAST IN ADDITION THIS SITE HAS LOST HIS FULL WORKS THERE WAS 3 PARTS TO THIS STORY
Definitely make the priest black to double the degradation of the , has to be white, wife. I agree with the other comment. Make him an Image, or a Rabbi for a change.
Almost a complete waste of a story, to many mistakes to mention. But I do love white women being seduced into serving black men. The first time being manipulated then being open to being blackmailed she has no choice. Him having her sucking his black cock for him everyday, sallowing when he finishes in her mouth. Telling her that her mouth is doing gods work and to show her love for him. The the Bible prohibits “ spilling his seed on the ground” and she must do her best each time.
This is bull crap I mean at least add the fact that the mother is possibly already pregnant with her husband second child because in the story tag box you show that it says pregnant when is she pregnant because she isn’t pregnant in the beginning of the story