All Comments on 'Suzie and Her Big Dick'

Nice set up to a Futa story. But I wanted to hear more. Dad should have showed sympathy for her need. Shouldn't the doctor have known she now had a dick. Couldn't the doctor have been a woman and she had woken up having her big dick sucked by a sexy -- or even dowdy -- lady doctor. Is there more to come?

I was working on finals and was so stressed out decided to write a story to let off some steam, I didn't put as much time into it as I would have liked to, but would like to write more on this one, and introduce some other stories.

This was an unusual story, and somewhat interesting, but it was very disjointed.. There were too many sudden leaps, and several bits seemed to be racing to be over...

Definite potential though! Keep going, try and read it back to yourself as if you were reading it out loud.. This can stop you from having things like run-on sentences.. :)

Incredibly bad

Well that escalated quickly