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Les Alouettes

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by Anonymous

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by estragon01/27/11

Good Start

but lose the cliches. The big black dick is worn out--in more ways than one. If in fact the dude was 10", he'd have chocked her to death. Remember, my dear, it's not how long you make it, it's how you make it long.

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by gimmie_your_load01/27/11

I will start by saying I really do apreciate honest constructive feedback, even if its not all positive.

But that comment was just silly. If you don't like this kind of story? Don't read it. As a woman who has deepthroated a full sized 9 inch cock to the hilt, I'll tell you that adding one more inch wouldn't kill me. Now the rarity of a ten inch cock is another matter entirely, but still within the realm of possibility. If you want to talk about "reality" then frankly this is probably not the site for you.

I get the feeling you simply just don't like the public obsession with black cock, and the stereotype of tremendous size that goes along with it. Take your beef somewhere else.

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by Anonymous01/27/11

I'm not comfortable with the casual racism on display here.

It's kind of gross, even if you don't mean it to be.

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by Anonymous01/27/11

Halftime Treat

Lusty Lady,

Nice halftime treat for the guy that recognized you. Keep sucking and writing!

Why can't I run into you, have my balls expertly sucked with a happy ending in your mouth and over your delectable face.

Lustfully yous,

Dick Liscious

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by gimmie_your_load01/27/11

Casual Racism

Please elaborate? In what way?

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by Anonymous01/28/11

great story

Love your writing... not sure why people can't appreciate a good story for what it is!!

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by Anonymous01/28/11

Excellent Description!

It's great to hear from a woman who loves cocksucking...and one who can write well to describe it in total detail...!! There's nothing like a girl who is slightly obsessed with sucking dick. They're the most fun on a date, the smartest and coolest chicks in the world...and you're obviously one of 'em!

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by pilotgal01/28/11

You have a wonderful talent for writing! Keep up the great work!

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by Anonymous02/21/11

wery hot.Keep it upp. I love your stories.

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by duke046704/02/14

Fan Story.

You write well if amateurishly. Don't let the adjective throw you. It isn't a put down. I enjoy reading your stories and have even bookmarked your page so I can go back to it.
In your bio you said you like "fan stories" so I will write you one. Don't expect too much as my writing is in another fiction genre entirely, but it will be a fun thing to do.
Look for a story by me titled "Lucia and a Different Kind of Whore". I haven't written it yet so if the title changes I will leave you another comment.

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