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Wonderful story
It was beautifully told.
mmmmh
i cant wait for the seond installment
A lil'bit like a tug of war
one minute seduction another minute a bit forceful.
He want to...definetly!
She is kinda 50/50 fearful and want to explore/ feel plesure.
Now we wait for the next chapter and the next dear heaven i hope it will be a short wait.
Great debut story!
A very well told maid/master story! I was drawn in right away and can't wait for the next chapter. Only a few minor editing errors. What a great first story! Congrats, and I hope you won't keep us waiting too long.
Speechless...
...that's how this story left me. You are one fantastic writer, and I think that you have what it takes to become a phenomenal one. I am very much looking forward to reading your future work!
the_quest
best story this year
I haven't read anything better in quite some time. It's great, I can't wait for the next chapter!
eagerly anticipating
fantastic first story, can't wait to read more
Wow
5 stars. amazing. hot. must have more...please???
waiting eagerly
I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is an achingly hot story.
Perfect!
Wow! great! Thanks for writing/sharing this story with us.. this is indeed a perfect story for me..
Great story
really great, I'm looking forward for the next parts
Top Notch
You have really blown me away with this exceptional series. One word for you: Publish. You are a serious talent.
more
Pls, miss. Complete the rest of the story, in the favor of lena. She deserves compensation for being used so torridly.
almost...
OMG... this was so intense, and well written. I almost wish I was a virgin again and had a do-over with Renz... of course with the pain I remember from the first time I have to stop at almost.
WOW
you are AMAZING! i kid you not i havent ached like this in a very long time, i wish more men were like renz, fierce,demanding yet loving. god my nipples are hard and my pussy's wet just from this story hahaha. keep up the good work!
Are you a professional?
If not, you should be. Your talents are wasted elsewhere. This is like reading a deliciously guilty harlequin novel. However, this is infinitely better. I love the sex. It's got my mojo rising. Please, don't be offended. I am not comparing you to the harlequin authors. You are far and away above that crowd of formatted plots and vanilla romance, which is too sickeningly sweet to read seriously. At least, for me. I love the duality of domination and tenderness, combined with raw sexual power. This entirety is a surefire heart and soul grabbing potent cocktail. Almost, if not impossible, to ignore or deny. Please, keep writing. Get an agent! I am looking forward to more of this and your other works.
Positivley bodice ripping!
i enjoyed this so much
more than just erotical
i really find it very catching and moving... couldnt find no flaws in ur writing ! congrats ! i write myself and i can tell ur gifted.
Jesus, that was amazing!
What a story! This is exactly how I hope every story like this would be, it's just perfect! Very well done, it's crazily hot and so well written, can't wait to read more! xxx
PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
This is sexy and passionate and twistedly romantic. I am hooked and can't wait for more.
They are two gorgeous characters with depth that you rarely see.
Well done!
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