by purekink
Thank you for writing this story and please ingnore this anonyous a**h*le.. what is he doing on this site anyway? I loved this story and wish I was that very lucky young man.
I am moving at the end of this month. I hope I have neighbors like you!
You obviously have a great talent for erotic writing about males submitting to females - but there's an inconsistency.
"Tales of your good looks had spilled eagerly from Jacqui's lips, and she had very high standards indeed."
Naaa, not gonna happen. Even dominant women will not think that a man than whom they are "slightly taller", who makes feeble struggles and has "long sleek hairless legs" (LOL) is a man of whom they tell "tales of [his] good looks". Just no.
But as I say, there's some talent there.