All Comments on 'The Bride'

The bride is asking about walking down the isle???? Just where is the small island you reference?

(Buy a dictionary. And stop writing in first person.)

Sorry folks for the mistake, I'm only human. Have already submitted the correct edited version.

This is erotic "literature". You are not in an English class, or trying to get published. You can write in the first person if you please. It was creative and I got off on it. So thank you.

Thanks and keep writing, don't be swayed by the occasional error, the scene is good the sex is fantastic. I like this and will make sure I read all of your works. Yes! - Kevin

Hand the ring to the Best Man and tell HIM to marry her, cuz you're out the door.

Betrayed by his about to be wife AND his best friend? No way he marries her. Not even in fantasy/literotica land.