Love how developed you made the story in the beginning. It makes one fall into the story from the start. off to the next chater.
I love chapter one on to chapter two
Not to nitpick (but that's what I'm doing), but gold doesn't rust. Just throwing that out there. That's as far into this story as I am, but you already used 'whom' correctly so I have high hopes. Love me some english majors.
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