All Comments on 'Love Unexpected Ch. 05'

My favorite story on this entire site! Please keep writing more stories! If not this series, then others :)

I just love the ending it was perfect, can wait to read your next series... one of ma favoriets jjijiii

the whole experience of reading your story was lovely.

awwwww....so sweet! I'm such a sucker for romantic love stories. I enjoyed the ending very much and I hope to read more stories from you.

Great job! Cheers!! (:

Also a sucker for a good romantic story. The sex was so hot and the ending was great. Very good story.

This was just so sweet :-) looking forward for more work from you, hurrrryyyy!!!!!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story ….. can’t wait to read more…

Really enjoyed this romantic story.

I am a bisexual crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much,

Sincerely,

Josie of Augusta, Georgia

Wonderful ending. Can't wait to see what you have next to post.

Thank you for this lovely story. Look forward to more. x

Ok!! You almost made me cry!!! Great Story!!!

You are such a romantic! It was a lovely story. Wish there had been more. I hope you revist these two sometime soon.

Wow loved your story thanks for sharing it...Ive added you to my favorites. : )

What a fabulous story!!!! It felt so seamless - it flowed like a river or well-told story, which is hard to write.

There are no awkward pauses or skipped details. I don't believe you've never written a story it felt so polished and captured all of the details (of everyday life) so brilliantly.

Truly outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for writing such a lovely romance :) I can't wait to read what you write in future.

Wonderful story!

I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Please do keep writing.

Cheers!

simply beautiful

im so sad that its over, but the ending was SO BEAUTIFUL!!! (tear) <3

Thank you for writing this. It was a fantastic story to read. Love at first sight is simply wonderful.^_^

I so loved this story and i cannot wait to read more of your work, that ending made me want to cry, you are really good and please don't ever stop writing!!!

i am CRYING from the beauty of the last scene...keep writing more, because youre an amazing author!!!

This story was very heartfelt and hot at the same time!! I loved their exploration together and there total openness about there feelings for each other privately and publicly.

I can't wait to read more of your stories!!!

this series was wonderful. it made me cry at how wonderful they were for one another, and i loved how supportive both their families and friends were to them at each stage in their lives.

This was a wonderful, most wonderful tale. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing this love story with us.

You so took me there!

Your a great communicator. Such a gift to be able to reach into peoples minds with your thoughts and bring such vivid pictures to life. thank you so much.

Great story, loved the characters - I shall be keeping an eye out for more

it's over! Such a lovely story. Wished there was more.

Is it bad if I wanted something to happen with John. I thought that one scene which he blushed with Derek was weird. But loved this story nontheless. Keep writing.

I really really liked this story. It was so wonderful and sweet. I would love to see Chris's story sometime. He just seemed interesting. I can't wait to see more from you!!!

I have read and re-read this story multiple times. I just love it so much. It is so sweet and cute. And the sex that is in the story is hot. Just had to comment on what a fantastic story this is.

Would really love more about them. U know the hole married life and all.

I cannot tell you how many times I have read this story, honestly probably 20. It is my favorite story on Lit. It is just so sweet, yet hot at the same time. You should seriously consider getting it published. I know I would pay for it. I would love to hear more about these guys, or maybe a whole new story. Just more please!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

i cried at the end i have to admit it i loved it

Gorgeous story, thankyou for writing it

I have re - read this story 100 times. Thank you for writing it. Sigh. To find love like this is what we all want. Thanks again and please write more. I hope you are as happy as Paul and Derek.

Loved everything about it -- Derek's lovely ways, Paul's manly, masculine, hairy chest and Derek's devotion to that chest! Great read! Glad they found each other and have loved each other so deeply!

This is my second time reading this story and I loved it once again! I wish you would submit more of your wonderful love stories!

This was really your first?? I loved it. i am gonna read your other stuff as well. Thanks for sharing these two with us. I tend to love stories with one guy being big , dominant and treat his man as tender and loving as Paul treated Derik.

For a first work this is amazing!!!! Great job. It was a perfect mix of sweet finding love with hot steamy sex.

I am in love with these characters and this story. Sad to see it end but couldn't be happier with the way it did. Really great!

Thank you so much for taking the time to write it. Can't wait to read your others!!

Hey Faye,

I remembered I helped you edit this story and came back to reread! Please let me know if you are writing again elsewhere. This was a great project.

Colandra

Awwwww! This was seriously the sweetest story!!!!!!

Enjoyed these boys very much. This was a steaming hot fairy tale ...