All Comments on 'How to Render Lard'

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 13 years agoAuthor
Title Change

"Rendering Lard According to Kate"

in order to avoid possible confusion as to the gender of the "recipe" author.

TzaraTzaraalmost 13 years ago
Different, and kind of fascinating.

I don't quite know what to say about this poem other than I quite like it. It seems to be placed kind of between gruesome and matter-of-fact, which I think is what I like about it. Certainly different. Well done.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 13 years agoAuthor

It was my first (and probably last) attempt of satire from a woman scorned.

Alas! I'm no better at erotic poetry either.

TzaraTzaraalmost 13 years ago
I'm just one reader, gm,

and far from the cleverest one. I did not see this as satire, but please do not interpret my dullness of sensibility as representative of poetry readers in general. Even Lit poetry readers in general.

I'm just not that smart.

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