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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/15/04

Ruined

The poem was sort of cute, but you begging for 5s "for your ego" ruined anything you wrote. It saddens me to think people may get high points for chatting on the bulletin boards and begging their "friends" to vote high.

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by damppanties02/17/04

Well... to the last commentor

Sorry it was ruined for you. It was a joke. Obviously wasn't taken as one I see. If my ego really rested on this poem and the feedback or votes I got from it, I'd be crushed with your one vote and my loss of H just now. :D

Have a nice day. :)

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by Anonymous05/12/04

Ha!!!!!

After reading a few grim [read, serious sex] Literotica stories this evening, your humor made my day. Loved it!
Art

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by DJHyrrikhayne09/29/04

Five Stars

I have to give this one a 5. It's the humor that makes this story stand out from the crowd.

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by teerenrut01/14/05

:)

Written tongue in check
Loved it
Turner

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by drksideofthemoon01/02/06

LOL!!!

Very clever...I'll never hear Old MacDonalds Farm the same again!

Brian
drksideofthemoon

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by Anonymous01/31/06

ohhh hell, your good!

Tooo cute, You made me giggle!!!
To heck with the downers!

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by Anonymous06/08/08

LOL

That was funny....Good Job

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by PrettyPinkPearl05/25/11

Can't stop...

.....laughing, grinning, and wishing I wrote this!!! Cute as a pair of overalls with nothing underneath.....

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by tazz31712/02/11

WITH APOLOGIES TO OLD MAC

and the farmers daughters. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous01/24/13

Bravo!

That was hillarious! Entertaining and possibly . . educating for someone who is learning the art . . of "poetry" . . .what did you think I was thinking? LOL

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by Oleguy01/24/13

They all said it.

I am not usually a poetry man but I just loved this.
As another commentator put it I will never hear 'Old MacDonald' again without a dirty mind flash.
You asked for it, you deserve it. 5#

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by Anonymous08/28/13

Tame

Very good though I like the poems more raunchy and detailed.

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by Anonymous10/08/13

Old Mcdonald

Not quite how I remember EIEIO But much better than the one I knew as a child.
I really enjoyed it..Especially the Lick Lick here and the Suck Suck there...

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by Anonymous12/10/13

I fived it for ya

Delightful and fun; nothing as arousing as a poem about getting my cock sucked unless it's her making me eat her pussy; love an aggressive woman. Very cute poem. benawriter@gmail.com

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