All Comments on 'Keep Me Safe Ch. 01'

you need to get the rest posted quickly, LOL, cause this is good! The questions raised with the diaries have me wondering! Can't wait :) for the rest of this series.

I agree with nomoretears00...Need to post next one soon! Got my curiousty burning.

I posted this weeks ago and gave up hope on it being posted so I was supprised to see it on here when I logged on. I've had the chance to wright the second part and I've just submitted it so hopefully this one will come online alot faster, fingers crossed. Thanks for the comments, feed back normaly makes me write faster.

Hi. Good start here. Do keep it up.

Just a couple of niggles.

please proof read or ask another good writer to do so for you. That way they can pick up the few instances where you duplicate er on some words. And missed a couple of words out.

From a plot point. The photos found sound hot, but out of character. Someone who has barely escaped rape multiple times will have major issues over trust, as you hinted at by the drop off in dates. Bondage needs a high level of trust and as you say he only has first dates and no seconds it would seem unlikely that he would gain enough trust to allow a guy to tie him up.

Good luck with the next chapters though.

I'll have to work on my proof reading and thanks for the honesty.

And with the photos, trust was taken into account, the answers are there if you can see it ... (SPOILERS)

For you first story this was fairly good, with a lot of intrigue…..can’t wait to read the next chapter hopefully it will be longer…..

Intriguing story, I hope you post the next chapter soon.

It's really getting good. I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D keep it coming!

I can't wait to read the next installment(s). I'm rather intrigued with what I've read so far! Keep up the good story-telling! :-D

Oooh, just found this story. Miles sounds so sweet. Who took the pictures of Miles? Hmmmm...can't wait for next installment.

I adore Miles, but am so pissed off with Ryan for reading the diaries. Grrr... I hope he has to grovel and beg for forgiveness before the end of this story.

It's a good start but needs to go farther for a chapter 01. There's no ending with enough power to make you want to read more.