All Comments on 'Jedi Stowaway Ch. 01'

I love this story. Part 2 please!!!

Ever find it funny how despite no sex occurring in the story, it still gets that little H symbol next to it?

I liked this story! It brought back memories of Obi-Wan's origin story only it took a completely different twist at the end.

not that hard to figure out, about the red H. Once a story gets enough number of votes if it is above rating 4.50 it will get the red H

Wonderfully written! The story really painted a picture in my mind and it was easy to follow. I am impressed. A lot of the time, stories tend to lose my interest, but not this one. I can't wait to read more.

The pacing on this is stilted, you have unnecessary and repetitive descriptors. Called the trooper battle hardened repeatedly. You'll want to watch that in the future. Nice setting though.