by JTCIII
Good work. Nasty story...hot but not too long either. Nice balance. Hope to see more stories like this from you.
Was happy to see this continuation of the first story. Though I was a little disappointed by the ending and being reminded of Katy Perry's unfortunate marriage to Russell Brand. Oh well, great and fun story besides that. Did it's job and pretty much exactly what you want from a story like this.
Thanks, John. I can always count on you for insightful feedback. My preference is for endings that promise more, leaving it up to the reader's imagination as to what the couple went on to do, but in this case I thought I'd used that ending a few too many times and I wanted to bring things to a definite conclusion. Hope it wasn't too disappointing for you.
Gotta say having a Katty fettish lately, and this is the best ive read- short, sassy, and sexy. Thanks