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by LordSlamdawgg11/26/11

" for the female of the species is more deadly then the male"

I feel like I know these people just a bit and am curious to know more . Both primary females seem to be manipulating the narrator. He's not complaining much ( yet ).

The author shows a deft touch relating information in & out of the bedroom , elevating this above "stroke story status " . The story could end here or stretch out . An elastic ending , well played indeed . Quite possibly another shoe has yet to be dropped .,Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous11/26/11

Entertaining story-well written

Good ending. Didn't expect it. Has possibilities for continuation. Story was erotic and held my interest. For some reason, never read your stories, will have to remedy that. Thanks. Score: 5 (ML)

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by roomfor1more11/27/11

A great example of what a loving wife story should be

The is an excellent example of a well written loving wife story and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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by Anonymous12/25/11

Good to see you back

Glad you're still writing. I enjoy all your stories, and I enjoyed this one very much. Especially the affectionate poly aspect.

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by Anonymous03/13/12

They shouldn't released you from your asylum cell.

There is enough excrement on this site already.

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by wron0105/05/12

Excellent story - but unfinished

You've put enough time and detail into this story to make it a real one (not just a stroke job), and as such it is unfinished. It ends with an impending crisis that promises to reveal more about the two women and their relationship with Jill's husband.

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by 1jbm08/09/12

Hot and very sexy!

Hot and enjoyable story!
Looking forward to more
Thanks for a good read
Joe

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by ythebadger10/13/12

I needed

to turn up the air conditionjng while I was reading that! That was hot - that was good - that needs another chapter. Please?

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by Lickideesplit10/13/12

Talk needed NOW!

Excellent story. Hard to believe Anne's hubby married her as a nanny, but maybe his Ex is ready to go back to 'married'! In any event, Hubby and Sweetie need to use their good rapport and communication skills right away! I would suggest that they agree to treat Anne as their joint mistress, and tell her (together) that manipulation games will be grounds for termination!
I liked the fact that Hubby finally recognized that Sweetie was acting more out of her OWN interest than his, and gently called her on it!
5*

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by robertl10/26/14

Loved the story

Would love to have seen another chapter to this. Great story!

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