All Comments on 'Castle Hotel'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Mmmmm. Wishing I could be her!

GruffaloGruffaloover 12 years ago
Good writing

Forced sex does not turn me on, but this story is damned well written. The ending is delicious, but would have been even better if she had been more dominant. I thought the beginning of the story was a bit insipid and full of stereotypes, but what happened later stood those on their head. Good stuff. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Waayyyy hhaaayyyyy - great story

A Well written story - more please

cupcakesparkycupcakesparkyover 12 years ago
great non-consent story!

anyone who doesn't like forced sex shouldn't be looking in this category. Those of us who fantasize about it LIKE stories of forced sex. It's a fantasy, not reality.

Well written and well played!

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