by gizm4c
Okay. I said to take your time, and you should, but I'm going nuts! I really like this and can't wait for more.
I appreciate the feedback I've received and wanted to let you know that I am with you on the length. However, this was the first story I submitted and each section I wrote (for the first few sections) were 3 or more pages on word document. The final few sections were 7-8 pages on word document. Not knowing how that would translate to the format here, I submitted each week as a separate chapter. Now I know that I probably should have submitted the entire story in one part, because individually they aren't that long in this format. I am keeping that in mind for any future stories I write, and it really puts some perspective on some of my favorite stories in here... they must actually be full length novels.
So glad you added aother chapter so quickly. This is a great story so far. Keep it up!! :o)
Just enough teasing to make us wonder about Blaine's past. Looking forward to more.
I'm intrigued by the two characters. I hope you will develop them more in the coming chapter. I like a bit of mystery, but for them to keep seeing each other and not learn what their pasts is going to prevent the story from moving forward. I really want to know what makes these two tick and what is stopping them from getting closer/involved.