I hope you develop this story. I have a little experience with chastity and have enjoyed it, even though it has been limited.
It might be good if you describe the type of device you use in the story - or even name it. That can be helpful. I would have enjoyed reading a little more about how it went on. Maybe even if there was a little initial difficulty.
I think it could be a good story, though. I hope you add more chapters.
Constructive criticism ... a bit more detail makes it more realistic. Maybe she researches on the web, learns from others with experience. Im currently locked in a CB-6000s. Forbidden orgasm for 10 days now. My Miss Alex requires me to read here and report back to her as a form of tease and denial since we don't live together. Adding how she teases him would be great. Btw she'll be reading your story and my comment. If im not nice, she adds days. Im am seeing her in 2 days so keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing
I liked it - hot - but it seemed to finish quickly - the milking part seemed rushed. For example, what did he say at different stages, how did she know when to stop, etc
I would like to know what happened after he serviced her. ?? Did she milk him again? How long did she wait, till next time? How did he feel physically afterwards? how emotionally? what changed in their dynamic? Like to know these things.
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