All Comments on 'Blood and Love Ch. 02'

I am loving this story but what a sad way to end it, if Evan is a vampire, here is mere speculating, wouldn't he already know about what happened to Sean's parents? Can't wait to see how this pans out...

Awwie how sad he shudnt feel guilty. Poor Evan... Sean has 2 apologize

Yet another story to get hooked on. I'm not getting any writing done at all.

Please get someone to check your writing before publishing, it's hard to read grammar all over the place and spelling errors.

I honestly didn't care about spelling and grammer the point is if you understand what they are trying to say then don't whine about spelling mistakes.

the ending in this one just took a fricking nose dive too soon way to soon!! it seemed rushed i thought there would be mystery who is evan damien?or rather what? but you just penned a half assed glimpse at him in a forest with his brother hinting at great danger and suddenly they are knee deep in their 1st kiss and sean has a moment of self realization and runs away because he does not deserve love?it was rushed and im not inclined to read further still all the best and i hope you improve.nix

They’ve known each other for a week. I realize that Evan has been watching and pining for Sean for much longer. But don’t absolutely freak a guy out by pledging love after just a week! Sean may feel similarly but he’s fraught with guilt and needs to work through all that before he faces intense emotions like love. Keep going but don’t move so fast that it is unrealistic.