All Comments on 'Courting a Vampire Ch. 03'

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kelleigh0127kelleigh0127about 12 years ago
Wonderful...

I can't wait for Ch. 4. I need to read how she's going to do go up against 3 Vampire females..

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsabout 12 years ago
Love the story so far!

Wish the chapters were longer.

sirraliasirraliaabout 12 years ago

Wish the chapters were longer....but then again it might make me late to work. Hehehe. Great story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great story

Really like the story so fast keep them coming

MtannerMtannerabout 12 years ago

This story is great so far. Please keep up the great work and thank you for sharing this with us.

bejeweledcatbejeweledcatabout 12 years ago
Great work...

I'm really enjoying Lilly's story. Nice twist on the usual vampire mythos and love the humor. Keep it coming and I'll keep reading and voting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Keep it Up!

Your story is absolutely fabulous. Thank you for posting each day - a huge plus. You will have a huge following sooner than you think. I look forward to your next installment.

Thank you

blackduchessblackduchessabout 12 years ago
Love It!!!

Very enjoyable with a touch of humor....can't wait for the next installment. Keep it coming.

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
Pace

I love the pace of this story. Lily you are to be married, go to your aunt to prepare. Hi Lily I'm your aunt let's go shopping until you can't take it anymore. And oh yea don't forget this is a fight to the death for a prince you haven't even met.

I just love the whole concept. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hmm..

I love the story but I wish she would rebel and have some backbone :/

DmitryDmitryabout 12 years ago
Dmitry LIKE

it TONS

Mermaid2189Mermaid2189about 12 years ago

it would be cool if she became a vampire later on or her vampire gene awakens or something along theses lines

Meridian13Meridian13about 12 years ago
Love So Far

Could be longer but at the speed you are going with chapters it's cool. Good Job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I LOVE the concept and its so different to all the nonhuman stories I have read on this site, please keep it coming, but ignore the ones wanting it quicker or longer, write at YOUR own pace, not what others want.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
V. good...

...so far several people have said they could be longer and they could,

but i like it.

if you keep updating this quickly, it doesn't really mater if the chapters are short.

but i do want more! ;)

good work keep it up!

k_k

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
WOW!!

Ive read all the chapters and all i can say is WOW!! your really good at this and it always leave me wanting for MORE I hope to read more of the story and finally meet the so called "price" and witness the competition. Thumbs up! for you!

sassygirl35sassygirl35about 12 years ago
grwat work

yes agrry let ther be the vamper line of her famly be bared in her and then come out just as her betrothed gos to pick one

keep the good work up

Rud1GirlRud1Girlabout 12 years ago
Too cute

Loving the twist

LNJones34LNJones34over 3 years ago

Best on the page....."You look like shit in black!! How is that even possible?!?!"

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