All Comments on 'The Miller Ch. 01'

Your opening has endless options..........great start

More please!!!!!

how do you say- decadent. No??? The only thing that bothered me was prostituting owns wife to the person lower by many class factor, for such short and minimal gain doesn't hold the "glue". Yes????

Excellent period piece. I am really looking forward to this one. Take you time to keep the rest at the same standard that this fine introduction.

Waiting for more !!!! ;)

"Master, I feel that I must inform you that 90% of the workers in your factory are women. The rest are children. Your ploy will not work."