by alkysmurf
pretty well done - keep it up - i will read more when you have it.
I found no problems with this magically Delicious story. Intoxicating- that is a word.
It was perfect, but it almost seems like you cut parts out.
He laid back to get teased, because it was her game, and the next sentence, she's guiding him in. I would have loved reading about the teasing, too.
amazing read short n sweet.....best part was u returned life's essence....loved it..